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DaLyRicaLViLLain vs L.I.
Aight...decided to do a quick little battle for the kids....here are the rules...
No Dickriding No Hate Votes No Crew Votes 10 Lines Due 30 Minutes after check in... I'll check in after you....goodluck peace.... |
Right on homey... Checkin in.. lets do this shit...
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Aight checked in.....30 minutes have started.......
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Just look at his style, no wonder he aint even respected...
Your rhymes are just like Reggie Miller's layup, rejected... Not one emcee on your win list is good so stop reppin that... Have enough wins for elevated but never comes cuz hes wack... Unknown on the site, wen he posts no one even notice he spoke... Can't score wit girls, only time he got ass wen his toilet paper broke... Not worth this much effort, but ill continue til hes gone... He's the herb who robs a bank with the Safety on...* Shut ya mouth, and dont speak until spoken to... Feels bad for dissin me so he said 'jus jokin dude'... Explanation... if u didnt no wut i meant by safety i meant the safety button on a gun....aight... |
Aight... Everybody feel this shit...
32 and 6 this nigga think i'll flow intimidated// Every verse he ever spit was stolen or premeditated// Im fresh created, Battlin for the heavy weight title// Puttin L.I. in his grave in this RB ghetto recital// Throw a bridal, shower for this hoe cake, cuz he's a wife// Straight addicted to these dicks you're fuckin swallowin for life// You dont want strife, Like i said leave L.I. in his death bed// You're LYRICALLY INEPT, ill leave the voters and the ref dead//(L.I.) Cuz readin this is cancerous, hazardous to yo health// Cuz i'm a killa in this rap game, read this and you'll kill yourself// For ya'll who dont know inept means wrong in a foolish kind of way... |
Good battle homey... aight lets get some votes on this shit...1
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Opener: L.I.
Humor: L.I. Flow: Draw Personals: Draw Struture: DaLy Metas: L.I. Finisher: DaLy Overall Vote: L.I. 6 & DalyLyricalVillain 4 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Da had the best punches and consistant flow because of his vocab and extreamly good rhymes. The other verse was weak and this battle was taken over because da other verse lacked multies, punches and just a week performance overall no offence to the other player
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uppin for votes... lets get more votes on this shit homeys dont sleep on this...1
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DaLyrical u came good..got the multis on this
didnt catch any punches tho or anything that stood out no offence on your verse playa LI, nuthing special either but a simple verse that had some whit and alright wordplay...close battle But Dalyrical gets this for hittin LI Harder good luck both |
hahahahahahaha lmfao....srry dalyricalvillain but u didnt win this....these people dont no how to vote.....uppin......dalyrical u got potenital but u def didnt take this and no im not bitching.....
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WOW...IS THAT RECORD FERREAL...32-6...NOT IN THIS BATTLE
OPENER:LI....THIS IS THE ONLY REALLY HOT SHYT U HAD IN UR VERSE CLOSER:VILLIAN..... PUNCHES:VILLIAN... FLOW:LI VOTE:VILLIAN...HIS PUNCHES HIT HARDER IN THIS MATCH...AND HE JUS CAME WAY HARDER..... I WONT POLL ON THIS UNTIL YALL VOTE ON THIS... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126411 |
haha... funny ish right here...
But anyways... Da. You say you're straight off the top and not premeditated... when you used some weak ass punches and some plkayed out shit... You could have had some nice punches in there but you worded them shitty. No personals at all, and thats what kills a verse... your flow was choppy too. LI, The flow was there, you came a little weak, but had more original punches. It flowed and rolled right off of the tounge. And you had 1 alright personal and one that could have been worded and set up better. The list could have been set up better and worded differently, and the one about him sayin hes juss jokin was alright. I give this to LI for having hte only personals... better flow, and better structure and more original punches. You herbs need to stop voting. |
yo i like that reggie miller line i saw that on the highlights and in the game...last minute STUFF lmfao that was sick..but hea good battle dalyrical pretty good shit from a newb good vocab and ur structure was aiight..u had good flow and ok punches your meta's were there and good personals..LI your shit was off the hook llol specially with the layup line...DAYUM..lmfao good shit good punches good flow good structure metas...everything
vote: LI |
aight uppin for votes...dont sleep on this ish...vote homeys
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