DON <VS> Trapt Rage
 

aight man lets do a good battle
u drop first
no cheating but we already kno that
10-14 lines
good luck pc
im gona drop tomoro u already kno y aight im out

Don's a rapper shit i can't tell//
cause all his rhymes ugly like sam cassell//
you was wack cause all ya lines played//
more than high top fades and the fucking arcade//
what do you get when you mix a fag and a loser//
think about it a min.......i came up with a soultion//
and this battle you losing, it's all ready been proven//
you couldn't be a idol if ya nickname was ruben//
my skills supreme and you will never pass me//
shit, half of verse, belongs to cassidy//
so when the gun comes out, il watch this bitch get low with Lil Jon//
you should check out my battle man,every punch is lethal//

they call him trapt cause his homosexuality hasnt been outted...
your verse has no effect if it was sung read or shouted...
this boy wears jeans so tite even his nuts feels trapt and crowded...
bitch is jus like walmart cause all your lyrical products are priced half rate...
inside rage can only keep you warm so ill set you ablaze wit hate...
and wen its all over youll be silently resting in a commatic state...
id hit this bitch so hard if he was british hed be the english pound...
and knock out all your teeth is the only way you can be crowned*...
newbs are allowed to suck but you take this rite and abuse it...
your like a ticking timebomb and ive been sent to defuse it...
why u fuck wit the italian don you wana end up like the rest underground...
jus read the papers bitch jimmy hoffas body has yet to be found...

* a crown is wat dentists put on a broken tooth to hold it together

uppin for votes drop a honest vote and we can return the favor pc

uppin for votes vote a honest vote and we will return the favor aight pc

uppin for votes lets get some votes on this battle aight pc

Trapt Rage = 31/50
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 6/10

DON = 32/40
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 6/10

Don got this one...had some pretty good punches and the rhymes were ok...Trapt had some good punches too..but not as hard tho..good battle...

I Liked Both Of Your Verses But I Think The First Line Of Don Really Got Trapt Good Peace One

^^^^^^^^^^my Voe Goes To Don

uppin for votes drop a honest vote and we will return the favor

Trapt Rage = 31/50
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 6/10

DON = 32/40
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 6/10

don takes this due to better rhymes and punches.....alll i gotta say is that you need to elevate your punches so that they hit harder and reword them a little bit........pc

this battle was a little evenly matched I was feeling both ya'll drops
mostly everything seemed right on point for both of u BIG UP!!!!!!!!
but in the end punches were the category I had to look to and I feel
DON had better punches all the way around

so therefore my vote goes to: DON

drop a honest vote on my shit it's in my sig

I have to give it to don. Becuase he had some pretty crazy punches. and his opener was whack so don gets this vote.