Battle: chaotic_wog vs. GhostRida
 

i may be new here but i aint no rookie
unless u want me 2 eat out ur mum u'll fetch me a cookie
hurry up bitch coz dis new kids starving
its ur name into a grave im gna b carving
ghost rida is ur name how u come up wit dat
ur aint invisible dumshit mustve thought of it while on crack
smokin ur dads dick aint a way 2 get high
but i kno ur motto ' smoke dick and fly'

dis lookz like a good battle ya need to hurry up n battle tho i'll vote wen ya do

lets get........ayo this nigga spit like is rhymes is cool,i'ma have his ass layed out, pissin hiself like old people in retirement homes//u couldn't match my style,should already figured it,but your ass is slow like retards,cause ya just not gettin it//i'll have ya ass wetted up like ya 1 years old,i got 8 shells fo that ass to put ya mouth on hold//they would think i'ma chriopracter the way i'm brakin ya back,man u stay on my balls like kobe stays shaqs//u need a ghostwriter kid,cause if ya had a flipmode,u still couldn't busta rhyme cause u whack kid//i'll have searcin for fame like stevie wonder,i'll blow ya brains out leave ya punk ass under the covers//think ya hot?,but i beg to differ,u couldn't match the kid if the battle was even handed to ya//beatin me is like u beatin aids,it ain't happen,cause i spit flames so hot it will burn out ya braids...........holla back

i'll felt this battle was alittle weak here the break down

punches:ghost
flow:ghost
wordplay:ghost
structre:ghost
overall:ghost

can you guys return the fava and finish my battle plz vote on them and i'll return the fava any time

the links are on my sig

uppin for votes.......................................

This shit was not even a battle Ghostrida took dis shit automatically because the other guy was really really shitty.. Advice 4 Chaotic step yo game up cause u r really shitty..............

Ghost the way tat u wrote tat shit is annoyin as hell & it took me mad time 2 read it so fix yo flow cause shit is really really annoyin


vote:Ghost

hurry up and close dis shit out lets go holla back

ok checked out Wog'z drop & it was whacker than my first battle (which I won) than I read Ghost's way better than Wog'z drop better flow, vocab, punches he takes this battle in every category possible .......................

do a honest vote on my battle: it's in my signature

punches:ghost
flow:ghost
wordplay:ghost
structre:ghost
overall:ghost
opener-gost
closer-gost

gost took this battle easly.....your punches was good but you need to elevate and reword your punches.....lots of peeps on this site need to reword they punches......you had a good opener but you could upp the hit power

ok gosht has this one but hey he had an alright opening and a good closure but gosht defended himself good and he came out with a hell of a closure.

and hey someone check out this link

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...813#post1321813

here it is my bad....