Street Warrior vs The One
 

10-20 lines
u spit first
3-0 is a ko and 5 to w/e wins
so go ahead and spit ya lines

go ahead and spit first punk

yo where da fuck r u spit ya shit already

u kallin me a punk?
look at u, a fat lil chunk
chunk a shyt, u kan't afford a pit
y don't u shut ur mouth an quit
go battle sumone as shyty as u
even betta, go get yaself a crew
maybe they kan help ya get betta
if u do send me a letta
a letta on how i waz rite
thank me,? u just might
now go, startin lookin
there's ur wife, she wantz ya cookin
u ain't no rappa
u a beava trappa
don't no wut ur doin on ere
ur just lookin for a kik in the rear
to get u in gear
to pik up ur career
here ya go wanna be
come for a rematch wen u kan at least try me

Look at this kid likes to get dissed/
All his lines are pittiful so dont get pissed/
Dont get pissed cuz ya gonna loose/
Kill u in a second didnt let u choose/
Look at this bitch callin himself the one/
This aint no fun this bitch is done/
And Im still not finished wit my verse/
U can tell dat I'm alwayz first/
Dont kno y he even picked up a mic/
Now he knows dat he shouldnt have stood up in this fight/
Itz ova so now listen and neva eva pick up another mic for the rest of ya life/
Cuz if u do ya gonna have a meeting wit a 10 inch knife/

IIght I got this kid done ya already kno dat I wonbut I need votes uppin for votes only ppl wit 20 post or more can vote remember explain ur vote and den vote on the poll

aight ppl, show the votes an explain em, win or lose i want feedback on mine, i'm still learnin, and Street, that was sick man, right on

well this battle was nuthin' too special at all for real ummm..... The One
u had good structure & decent flow but your punches were the definition
of whackness no offense Ima noob also....... Street you take this basically because you had better punches & everything else seriously if you both
just starting than you have a long ass time to elevate

do a honest vote on my battle: it's in my signature

iight cooll 1-0 and no I aint startin to rap thing is i felt like takin it ez

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enjoyment-street

this was a wack battle.....the one you need t o elevate and work on your structure hardcore

WHACK ASSED BATTLE. Neither of you had anything to offer.
The one had no flow, structure or punches. Get a lesson in how to battle
Street ya had punches but they were simple.

Vote-Street

oh yeah peep my battl eand drop an honest vote (its in mah sig)

One

Flow 5/10
Rhymes 5/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 5/10

Street

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 8/10

v/ Street

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both these cats aint impressed too much...One you know i got love for you but lengthen ur lines more dont just use 4 words a line, and use metaphors and shit.
Street it was pretty simple but u didnt need much on dis battle, u beat him in every category but didnt kill him.

v=street

hard to choose
 

both lacking some thing, but work on that shit.
All his lines are pittiful so dont get pissed/
Dont get pissed cuz ya gonna loose/
hate how u guys repeat some shit
but street gets my vote cause his shit didnt make me sleep as much...