deadly vision vs. l.i.
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

Blah!!........1st it was Enygma...now..L.I...hahaha

Checkity check.

should be a nice one...check in.....

Ok dammit.............

i see is due 2day.

erm...ama spit a no show verse 4 lines..if he dont spit on time. if he does ama do my basic 10 lines quick. ama be on waitin.

Blah!!

C'mon u said this should be a nice one!
Why u scared to spit, little 14 yrs old son.
34-6?U battle noobs, so u think u electrifyin
must be yo genetic buildupis, u wack stop denyin.

blah!!

I explained my reasons.

Blah!! i guess he aint droppin cuz.....its almost mornin.

4:35 am pacific for me i waited.

and on rb time its over 12:00am

I guess L.I didnt show.

Am out.

Close this.

it's only thursday he has till tonight to post his verse

lol at DV....deadline's tonight buddy....i thought i explained that to you on aim....

Meh, he just gotta edit his verse....

Oh aight.

I missunderstood it differently cuz when i talked to L.I on aim....i asked em arent we suppose to spit .....on wensday..lol

but yea holla.

yo deadly get on aim if you see this....how many lines u wanna do?.......

okay ill edit this and post my verse....DV im doin ten so if u can jus do ten...u down wit that?....

Almost pissed his pants seein that I didn’t post….....thought I no showed…
Hopes were crushed when the truth was broke…doesn’t like heavy loads…
Stick to ya audio’s……………….cause text woesnt meant for your type…
On ya way you go…………...name in the title, hype goes down the pipe…
Already handed a loss……………not one of your verses got us intrigued…

I just keep getting stuck wit em…for example this weeks battle in the league…
Shit is tense till your verse is dropped…….then straight to amusing…
Just nick name this kid RB’s fisherman…the way he hooked on losing…
Get ya weak ass outta here, bein run over like a game of red rover…
If you want us to fall for them lines, give us sometin to trip over…

Attenchuuun someone about to get M-e-r-k-e-d.



^kido u dont like womens!! see you aint gonna get no bare hits, I can spare wits..
Your ass like popular opinions even R and Profilikz faggots that share it..
I swear this little kid i smack the internet nerds who's flows lack the burn..
fruitcake u know u gonna take a loss, cause I give payback like tax returns..
Metaphorically Insane? stop copyin writs, and paste it, u think u a thief and shit?...
Like fiendish chicks-wit teeny tits-I leave yo wack herbish MT crew meaningless....
Its a unavoidable predictcament, when u think u can win, when u lyrically sensative...
And 14yrs old kid is impoyd a already " finish him", when ultrasonic rhythem hit....

=M-e-r-k-e-d=

Listen up i ain't "chinese", but this "bitch still gonna get ate", I hit this "fag" with clip that'll make his brain shift, so he think "straight"..
You was born wack wit a lyrical knife stuck in ya face and I guess no 'way' ta 'elevate..

Blah.....If u dont understand personals. dont vote

v/ L.I.

Made more sense.. less filler.. harder punches.. better use of personals.. flowed fine.. opener an closer got off to a good start an wrapped up well respectively.. used the quote well.. DV.. alot of played concepts.. don`t need to use "" to emphasise words neither.. seemed there was alot of filler in there.. unlike ya opponent you opened an closed horribly with ya last lines.

V/ L.I.

Both of y'all dropped some tight verse but i have to say i was feelin L.I. more in his drop. both y'all had sum gud flow in ure spits and the structure was gud in both. there was obvious punches and personals in both verse, but i think that L.I. was hitting harder most of the time and his punches had better connection. also DV came less original in his verse with a couple of played out lines. overall L.I. just came a lot stronger with harder personals and punches and showed more originality.

Up hoes.