meters vs. killaconcepz
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

checkk check.

checking in for killaconz

i asked him to check in for me thanx yo

Aiyo

i'll leave meter's soul skorched his body Contorted and deminished/
can't be replenished-when i dissect till he can only be measured in inches/
then beat him in the forehead wit a watch so u can say i'm beatin him around da clock/
and he's a gay faggot cuz his avvy makes it obvious that he loves cock/ {Birds}
dammit u fuckin suck so i'll be quik to leave u stagnent- so stop braggin/
before i leave ya in a mass distraction while rippin ya body to fragments/
Concepz'll diisect ya optic tissue- and blur ya retina to cantract ya visuals/
i'm sinical-and will quikly drag this guy to a bloody death and rip this individualz/

We'll go 8 for 8 then. Let keying commence...

I'ma murder this killa with filler, spill the blood of bitches who don't belong..
Atleast you're innovative with vocab...or are those just words spelled wrong?
Killa's packaged along with the perfect sig...with symbolism we all can trust
because whenever you drop a verse, it feels like you're regurgiatating on us
Bust this fake-ass pansy...don't think that i'm too nice to forget to mention
When I fucked your mom to death...it was only to give her a killa concepzion
Hoped you learned your lesson...while i leave with your throat in my hand
'cuz i'll leave your head dropping faster than if you were the elephant man

hahah meters from hence over on old rb what up

well this is an okay battle but killaconcepz was just outclassed in this one......meters just outshined him with the puncehs and the wordplay.........if meters wasnt as gud as he is then killa woulda gotten this but the fact is that meters is that gud so there for meters gets my vote

v/meters

check it
 

aight, meters took this

killa, you did have a good amount of filler, poorly developed punches and your setup didn't go with the punch, your hottest line was
then beat him in the forehead wit a watch so u can say i'm beatin him around da clock/
the rest wern't really punches, had good vocab and some good ideas they just need to be worded differently

meters, your verse wasn't that great either, but ya had some harder punches with nice personals and sounded more expierienced and thats what got you the win

v/ Meters.

More original punches an personals.. some funnyish ideas.. like the opener.. killa.. so much mad played lines.. the personals an name flips DON`T WORK ANYMORE.. get some new ones.. 2nd bar was bad.. avvy flip is wack an `clock` line was worse.

killa - it was ok....nothing special...stretched lines...sum multi's....only 1 or 2 decent punches....just an okay verse...need to work on ur wordplay, meta's, and personals...elevate man...

meters - easy win...u had actual punches that hit and u had good meta's...some filler but still took this easily...had better wordplay....flow was on..,,easy win...mis-match from the start....

Vote - meters

breakdown for killaconcepz:

flow:alittle shaky some of the bars weren't workin too while for me 5/10

volcab:good job you lose points cause it kinda wrecked your flow in spots but you got this down 6/10

punches:fav line,"can't be replenished-when i dissect till he can only be measured in inches/" nothing too damaging here alot of it didn't seem too strong 6/10


overall:17/30 pretty good verse

breakdown for meters:

flow:workin well no off spots good job 7/10

volcab:nice helped with the flow well 6/10

punches:fav line,"Atleast you're innovative with vocab...or are those just words spelled wrong?" good personal i liked all of your lines good job 7/10

overall:20/30

vote--meters ran away with this

5-0 meters wins closing