babylon vs. blackthief
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

Damn I gotta battle my homie thats fucked up............

well what eva I'm checked........

Ahhhh shit now!fa sho checkin in.....

Ill choke this "Jersey" "Kidd" with tha inter"net"(New Jersey Nets...J-Kidd)
Hellish-type lyrics got Babylon worked up into a sweat
Throwin punchlines at him from the chest up
And leave him lookin like he was soakin in a tub of ketchup
Take this "horseman" of C.S. to tha glue factory
And stomp him out like we was at a shoe factory
Even wit AIDS you couldn't be sick wit it
Whatever you do to get by make sure you stick wit it
Cause if you had to spit to put clothes on ya back
This nigga would be butt-naked...we doze on ya tracks
Freeze his flow and drop it and he still couldn't "break-through"
Killin this nigga in the first scene, no need for a take-too
This tha last of Babylon Im bout to break you
Ands expose tha light and reveal that you fake too
Like Burberry in the hood you a thing of the past
Just a played out mc who aint made to last




holla back

whats good....blah.....


black theif!......this cats wack, a herb that lost his way...
I took out the garbge.......without relisin I tost his ass away..
and he probably wont like the votes, so u gonna see him sway...
and he probaly wont like this quote cause....

and he is a theif for bitting...and its hard for him to hide...
cause black theif admits he takes from rappers....

n' he copies my style..hes worthless, he's stellin trends from me...
n' he must spice his muscles...cuz he's got HERBish TENDENTcies...
and Black theif cant sustain him self....in certain situations....
cause he wish's he could ADD punches.......
.........but gits confused when it comes to aRHYTHMatic equations

breakdown for blackthief:

flow:kinda choppy don't know couldn't really get into it 5/10

volcab:average nothing advance or anything 5/10

punches:nothing quotable a few average lines 5/10

overall:15/30

breakdown for babylon:

flow:workin alright good job 6/10

volcab:nice a notch above black 6/10

punches:fav line,"n' he must spice his muscles...cuz he's got HERBish TENDENTcies..." overall good job at the personals 7/10

overall:19/30

vote--babylon

1-0 babylon wins