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limited edition vs. unholy wun
deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max. |
A'ight...damn, dawg looks like I'm battlin' you twice....looks like we'll get a chance to do a topical in EFL and a regualr battle in here.
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sorry didn't know you guys were already battling
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^^It's coo dawg. Gives us a chance to show our skills in both. Checkin' in...
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Im not sure when ill get my verse im at my dads work but my home internet is down.
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Limited Edition's verse
Yo...check it...Unholy Wun... Please listen carefully...this shit flyin' by ya in locomotives 'Ill IntentionZ' ain' in ya realitiy...you don't understand tha 'MotiF' Thinkin' you ill...a vet? Ha, Ha, Dawg, you must be dreamin' You don't deserve to be on this site...I cast thee out, 'Demon' No-one would come to ya shows...audio? No point of you startin' Peeps could come for free...and you would still be overchargin' So casually I rip you...use this mike like a kitchen appliance Burn you wit my 'microwave' heat...you just don't know tha science* You break easy...like '5-Star' binders, you can shatter, son Too bad ya broke...cried to ya daddy 'cause 'you couldn' have Wun'** I shouldn't have battle you...that is what my concious told me Fix that ragity ass clothing... ...'cause that's the only way you be 'Unholy'... For Herbs: * Doesn't know the science behind heat ** Double Punch...can't afford a 5 star binder, and he couldn't have won this. |
Lol u dont know what MoTiF meens Huh Lol...
Ight Kid Step's to Me Ima Show him Some iLL IntentsionZ.. Special Olympis Rapper they Need ur Wheel Chair Deminsions.. Leader of a Small Time Crew that Leads Itself No-Were.. Theres a Tutorial Section on this site U really need To Go-There.. You couldnt be Limited if u were a Babe Ruth Rookie Card.. Leave ur Vision Star'ed Hits that leave ur Mind Scared.. Dont Click Below its Prolly a Pic of this Kid and his Dildo.. Did u get a Discount on ur Cheap Rhymes I Surly Hope-So.. I Must Be Glue cause i keep Gettin Stuck Battlin Frauds.. Bad Lyrics Man Label's wouldnt touch u with 10 foot Rods.. Let me Leave u here Since u Left the Branch From a Tree.. See you cant Keep up with Me Try agian when u know how to Free.. |
A'ight, this is a hot battle...uppin' this shit fo sho.
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v/unholy wun
why? his verse was better why? he had better punches why? because he''s dope why? shit ionno just v/unholy wun |
breakdown for limited edition:
flow:workin alright nothing bad to say about it 6/10 volcab: average i didn't see anything to special 5/10 punches:nothing too great i'm wasn't feeling much of it 5/10 overall:16/30 better then most of the league but it wasn't missing any real substance this week breakdown for unholy wun: flow:workin basic nothing too complex or special about the structure 6/10 volcab:nothing too say 5/10 punches:fav line,"Special Olympis Rapper they Need ur Wheel Chair Deminsions.." i liked it kinda played idea though aside from that you did a better job then limited 6/10 overall:17/30 vote--unholy wun |
Ight 2-0 Uppin.
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Uppin this shit... 0-2....bein slept on hard...
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alrighty here's my breakdown...
ididn't really like l.e's verse at all..nothing was personal really or hard hitting...it' flowed decent...kinda choppy in two places... but unwholy's verse just took over...although he is a bitch...jokes...he did come pretty hard... v-un |
Haha Poll Lol ight 3-0 isnt that KO ???
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