rising sun vs. valor
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

checkin in......

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im battling this dude with no real dope raps....
my rymes hitting this bitch so hard he's having anxiety attacks.....

dawg, your more brain less then eddy hascal......
attaking you like hembroids attack the asswhole....
this dudes skill level will never be ''RISING''.....
his skill is like saddam's ''SUN''always hiding....(aint none)
i'd help you with your problems,but im not wack so i dont know the feeling....
my flows hit you like a missile destroys a building......

damn i love being able to be working dudes.....
but in this battle i didn't need flow because i just got done merking you

my verse
 

My verse is like AI’s crossover, you know that your gonna-get-shooked
Like the Pistons coming into the Finals….
You know that your ass is gonna-get-whopped
About-to-get-booked as I find-the-violence
To murk-this-tyrant with flows harder than that of fire-hydrants
I am not so silent so I’m gonna be honest….
DirtBoy should make me a promise to never make me to battle this novice
You’re the ultimate loser in this community like “fat”-“nerds”
It’s your destiny to lose, so you better spin the “wheels of fortune” back-wards
While “ducking” like quacked-birds, you’ll spit whack-words
Turn you to a black-herb possessing a dream by having “chicken wings”*
I’m nice like Lincoln rims and call my verse Baron Davis cause it-can-sting
You’ll never have a chance like a midget trying block Yao-Ming
Your colder than the ghe-ttos as your verse contradict what your rec.-shows
Come with your best-flows, couldn’t be tough as a rhino even if you wore all Ecko
Your like harmless lizards cause you’ve been wack straight from the GECKO

*chicken wings=wings are a symbol for dreams, and calling someone a pussy means there are a chicken. So I am saying he is scared to dream…..sorry for the explanation

breakdown for rising sun:

flow:workin for me i had no problems with it good job 6/10

volcab:alright i guess nothing against it coming from me alright job 6/10

punches: best line,"To murk-this-tyrant with flows harder than that of fire-hydrants" kinda played idea but you did alright here 6/10

overall:18/30 well rounded verse lacked anything to really help stand out from the others in the league though

breakdown for valor:

flow:kinda choppy some of the bars got way outta hand and too long without any real internal rhyming to help it out not a great job here 4/10

volcab:nothing really to talk about you could use some work 5/10

punches:i wasn't liking any of this you need some work here too 5/10

overall:14/30 gotta say better then alot of my early stuff you'll pick it up just keep working on it

vote--rising sun

rising sun.........
you had good evrything
but you lacked good flow and strucutre and this in my oppinion lost you the battle
My verse is like AI’s crossover, you know that your gonna-get-shooked
Like the Pistons coming into the Finals….
You know that your ass is gonna-get-whopped
^^ holy shit that lin was fucking terrible you should get booted from rb for that shit WACK
overall *5* ( i dont see what dirtboy was so happy about,ur verse sucked)
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valor.............
you had a better verse
you had betetr structure than him and kept it flowing so this won you the battle
this dudes skill level will never be ''RISING''.....
his skill is like saddam's ''SUN''always hiding.
that blew thios battle away for u
not a great spit but got the job done...........
overall *6*
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my vote valor

ok i am gonna break this down

valor- ok man idk man your punches were hitin but not hard enough you had some personals but they were just plays off his name nothin special word man

risin- man punches were weak man ok, but you had one or to personals that were way better than his you elevated nasty since we battled word man

v/ rising

Rising had better flow and Punches i just wasnt feelin Vaor not good disses or Punches.

RS=6.434/10
V=5.323/10

3-1 rising sun wins