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DirtBoy69 05-30-04 10:10 PM

**special match** accomplishment vs. dirtboy69
 
16 line max
4 line min

check in if you want

verses due thrusday

votes MUST BE EXPLAINED AND MUST BE FROM THIS LEAGUE

accomplishment gets a champ match next week if he wins

accomplishment 05-30-04 11:11 PM

yeah checki n sucka free

accomplishment 06-03-04 07:29 PM

you get stomped in soil, that why -dirt- boi, lies restin
kid figgers its his league so he ain't gotta check in
my name suits me, i'm knonw for havin pieces of emcees in my bile
but this kid is no accomplishment, look guys -he changed his tite-
kid get smashed and curb stomps the only way you hard to theese streets
fingers clenched cuz choke holds on kids become hard to realease
you bite from awful emcees and put shame to them ate rhymes
this kids an herb and runs da league, not much else to say in theese eight lines

sorry its so short try not to make yours that long... i got shit to do peace

DirtBoy69 06-03-04 09:21 PM

alright i had a full 1

accomplishment accept my apolegy i did close your thread alittle prematurly//
but you gotta understand you see i didn't know bout your learning disability//
in simplicity you couldn't count to sixteen hell can you even count past three//
vemonous punches that'll leave your body numb like a snake that's posionous//
this guy accomplish something? ha everyone of his punches are a huge miss//
you seven wins up in this but only when your oppenent doens't post a diss//
up against lyrics you fold like big businesses that don't have sales that are bold//
one loss to me and it'll shatter your esteem like it was frozen solid left in the cold//
biting your rhyme styles from multiple mp3 files and dialouge from 8 miles in text//
smash the floor tiles with you body no champ titles just losses when you try to flex//

-Zone Out- 06-03-04 10:20 PM

this was one of the worst battles I've ever seen
accomp, came weak as hell, with played out the punches and shit that wasnt even worthy of the league
so did Dirtboy, but towards the end he started to spit decent
like the frozen line, and the 8 mile text line
so
v/dirtboy
for picking it up by a little bit towards his end!

L.I. 06-04-04 03:38 PM

accomp - a good spit....nothing extraordinary...but good flow....punches were funny...but not complex....good wordplay....personals were def there....good meta or two...just 8 lines so u didnt have much in there....but u did good with that amount....

dirtboy - it was very stretched....so no flow...punches were decent....personals were okay...woulda been better with more wordplay....u had the meta's in this battle....but not the punches or personals....and ur stretched lines fucked ur flow up....elevate on ur wordplay and that will help ur verse a lot...

Vote - accomplishment

Zone Out 06-04-04 03:51 PM

v/Dirtboy
I feel he came less wack than Accomp

Key... 06-04-04 08:21 PM

This was half assed...........................seriously.

Dirty Vs Accom....wtf this was weak ass battle i expected more.

I have to go whoever had betta punches seriously.

V/: Accom

accomplishment 06-05-04 02:26 AM

agreed i came wack as fuck because i got honest 10 minutes to type and post this shit i had shit to do...

SLUT! 06-06-04 12:18 AM

man you come weak all the time.....i cant vote because it will be dqd like all my other votes in his battle he thinks that htey are hate votes......they would be if you had beat me and not the other way around.....how it gunna be a hate vote when i beat you.....fucking maroon

Casual 06-06-04 09:14 AM

v/ DirtBoy.

Cos i`m nice like that.

Plus he had a nice closer.

Compared to the rest.

DirtBoy69 06-06-04 08:17 PM

3-2 i win


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