vinman vs. t- strom
 

this should be an easy battle for you u no the rules 10 lines or 5 bars iight


and pls no crew or dick riders

check in we start when u check in

yo
 

aiight b4 i chk in.................we still got that 15 min time limit after i chk rite?

ok
 

fuck it chkin in now......15 mins dawg............................gud luck...............................

check it look at this fag he called the storm when hes fulled with softness and dickless/ pulling the damn trigger making this wannbe helpless

the storm is a fag not a prositute but a he- whore/ while he bangin with other men
he aslo scremin no- more

i respect he from england he alot style and taste/ but pls nigga leave this site its running up yo bill and its a waste

my flow is deadly fatser than randy johnson in a sprint/im knowcking on his dome until its obliviuated and has a dent

as you can see i have now calmed the strom its a nice gentle brezze/ as you can see hes at rest, laid to be, and at ease

this is the real the first i had to edit sorry

yo
 

reppin DK,ima call u B.K..coz u am gona grill,only way u gon b hot n make u ill/
u neva get wit ma sick-spill, style lifeless like i gave u tha contraceptive-pill/
u cnt find my level...i leave you lost like the city of ATLANTIS/
like snoop dogg im tha bo$$....u ma pray and i`m the MANTIS/
jus like im smokin crack i know im above u...im tha king divine/
u jus plain coke,i know im HIGHER before u finish ya first line/
u suffer from hazy-syllable-amnesia?...i hve crazy-lyrical-madness/
it a dazy-optical seizure?.....nah u specialise in lazy-cynical-badness
i kick out too much power for u to beat me in this rhyme-race/
even if i gave u a port,polish n shine,u`d still end up second-place/

uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 

drop an HONEST vote and ya links will return an HONEST vote..........................

aight vinam u elevatin but u gotta elevate a lot mroe to take storm nice flow tho

t-storm slow ya lines down...they seen to be forced but u got out waat chu wanted to say so its all good..nice punches...nice flow..nice wordplay..nice multies...nice vocab too u got dis battle now doubt
v/t-storm.

lol T-Storm u should edit it before any body else reads it look'

reppin DK,ima call u B.K..coz u am gona grill,only way u gon b hot n make u ill

It SHOULD BE \/\/\/\/
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reppin DK,ima call u B.K..cause u IM gona grill,thats only way u gon b hot n make u ill

thats defintetly T-Storms, he owns this battle, u kno, Peace

yeh
 

^^^^^^^yeh i know my lines need slowin down^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^jus the way it comes off........i spit fast

oh well i no im fin to lose uupin for votes

T-Storm got this fo sho...

Vinman
check it look at this fag he called the storm when hes fulled with softness and hes dickless/ pulling the damn trigger making this wannbe helpless

Breakdown of that line - It didnt rhyme, and there was NO structure in it... Fix that up..

Vinman - You didnt have really any good punches or personals, and your structure was horrible...

T-Storm - You won this by far.. your structure was good, you have rhymes,, you had punches..

Punches usually win battles... you had em.. you won...

Good battle..

Vote T-Storm

aight this battle goes to t-storm. vinamin you had zero structure hommie, no hate tho. good battle. t-storm came with it harder with the punches and had better flow and structure.

VOTE= T-Storm

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