Battle: Eli-22 vs young dE
 

Ight here are da rules:

5-10bars
no dr,crew,hater votes
spit 30min after u check in
3-0 KO or first to 5votes
U spit first


Eli-22 = toonice = cityboi = Ghostrida = all DQ'ed for cheating

ight yo yo

cmon since the date of birth u been gay/ me i been a thug since way/ bakk then/ now im pakkin the mac 10/ drivin in tha bLack benz/ niggaz gotta probLem ill gat them/ even writin u cant stop me/ waLkin down ya block sportin more ice than hockey/ pass tha heat..need to let my anga out/ by the time im done ya gutz b hangin out/

checkin in........................................

You say ya name iz young dE ya need 2 think twice b4 u fuck wit me leave u in da hospital gettin fed through and IV// Leave ya bitch ass layin in a bed wit a bag 2 pee//
Say my guts hangin out but my nuts hangin out ya mommas mouf while i'm skeetin on her blouse// Nigga like eli run up in ya house put 2 to ya dome den merk ya mom wuz she callin da law on da phone//You knew b4 u stepped in dis battle dat i wuz gonna have ya body parts mixed and dismantled//Da flames dat i spit da devil can't handle//

uppin for votes...................................

iight not bad now let the votin decide

Flow: Young
Structure: tied
punches: young
humor:eli

Vote goes 2 young...Yo both yall need 2 elevate change ya structure elevate on ya punches and rhymes.... iight good battle ~1~

yo wuz good ppls did wuz a decent battle young ryhme scheme wuz better but flat out eli did wut he had 2 do 2 rip him

v/eli

punches:young
flow:young
wordplay:none
structure:young
personals:young
overall:young

yo dis battle wuz ight i mean both mc's 4 da most part did dey thing but i feel eli cam harder wit punches and overall flow of his ryhme so my vote go's 2 him

vote-eli