$ik vs VA
 

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Lacerate This "VA's" Juggular, And Decapitate Him Quickly ,And Bag His Head
Presist's To Mention "Dickriders", I Guess That Explain's The Multiple Men Up In His Bed

You Wantin' To Test My Skill's, I Like A Mentally Retarded Kid, Tryin' To Take Final Exam's
Well Im Physically Crushin' You Hand, And Bout To Rip This Kid Apart By Him DNA Strand's

Like A Mineral Your Easily Broken Down, Yet You Proceed To Act Hard Compound Rock's
You Could'nt Stop My Punches, If You Barricaded Yourself In A Room With Multiple Lock's

My Rhyme's Is Hazardous To Your Health, And I'm Leavin' Ya Ass Poor Of My Intellectual Wealth
Man Your So Whack The Felt-Tip Of My Sharpy, Will Leave Your Ass Two Sub-Simetrical Welt's

You Could'nt Accelerate-n-Land A Decent Punch, Even If You Gathered Downhill Momentum
I Don't Take You Seriously, Cause In This Battle Your Like A "VA Thought" And All I Do Is Vent Em'

Im Contaminatin' This "False VA's" Immune System, I Gave Out A Warnin' But He Did'nt Listen
Use My Percision To Decapitate This "Heathen", And Puncture His Voice-Box To Stop His Breathen

In This One-Sided Battle You Tha Light-Weight Of Us Both, Just Like Cocaine Im Dimishin' Ya Pulse
I'm Like A Bacterial Host, The Only Way You Would Win This Battle,Is If You Bit My Rhyme-Overdose

My Repetative Punches Depletin' Yuor Body Of Essential Nutrient's, And Fryin' Ya Brain Like Computer-Chip's
I Just Murdered This Kid, He Was Severly-Tortured Through-Out This Entire Battle, As If I Was Cracken-Whips

there is no way you types all that in 10 minutes..... prewritten shit is a sorry way to battle.. check

why is sik bout to tango with tha opposite of health.
like medicine on tha top shelf, youll die just strainin yourself.
im evolving "mild cold" into "deadly fever".
head ache so bad, your brains are battered like eggs in a beeder.
like mosquito bites ,is blood clotten on your skin.
enter your pores within tha first injection and punish you like a sin.
cuz im a god figure overlooken down on yor verse.
my text is power point like a sermon at church, iLL even ujnustly curse.
" cuz i dont give a fuck who you are"... i can remove a blemish, and i can erase a scar.
this verse like golf un tha stars, i cant see tha green but im still one under par.
battle satus; va at double birdy, and bak siinz at double bogie.
im inslavin this homie, but harry potter wont be free'in this "toby".
this newby kat's words is part of the old era, sumthin like a groovey rap.
out of date to tha last duty that could be rewarded with a scooby snack.

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ummmm this battle was ok but i wasnt that interested in it that much....culd of been better....well imma vote for VA i cuz i agree wit him how r u going to get allthat stuff in 10 mins if its not prewritten u did have the better verse but i think its prewritten u guys should do another battle but a blind spit

o yea leave feeback for C.S latest open mic we wont stay down the link is in my sig

my vote is gona go to sik cause ur punches were stronger even though it does sound prewritten but thats aight va urs was good jus siks had more punches and flow so i vote for him

v/sik

prewritten is no ok, uppin...

even if that shit was pre-written, i was still feelin my man VA he has great shit i luv his metaphors and punches. Sik good verse but i was feelin it as hard as Va aight vote goes to Va

i'M SORRY BUT I AM A REALLY TOUGH CRITIC BUT I WILL BE HONEST. SIK WETHER THAT WAS PREWRITTEN OR NOT... IT HAD GOOD PUNCHES AND GOOD TIMING BUT JUST NOT ENOUGH OF EITHER. VA YOUR SHIT WAS LACKIN A LITTLE BIT BUT YOU FOLLOWED THROUGH AND YOU GOT MY VOTE. oops sorry bout the caps

vote va

punches:va
flow both
wordplay:both
structure:va
personals:va
overall:va

can you guys return tha fava the links are on my sig

no offense to $ik cus his shit was hot and all but i gotta give it to VA he came in wit hotta punches and kiLLd it