e-dubz vs. theone
 

iight 8-16 lines
no crew, hate or d/r votes
i set it up u spit first
i got 20 mins after u
check in and spit when u ready goodluck

aight, sounds good, but one thing, wut u mean u got 20 minz afta me?

once u spit ur verse i got 20 mins to post mine

aight, chek it

look at thiz fool i'm battlin
i'll wait in the bush there rattlin

he'll come right up to my tree
he lookz up and therez me

wit a gun to hiz head
i shoot, til i see the red outta hiz head

hiz dead witout a chance to survive
no1 kan even try to revive

i've dun too much to him
ur future in rap iz grim

he tries hard, i'll give him that
but no1, kan stand up to a gat

he ripz an tried to burn me
but i'm TheOne, turn round an flee

while u kan, bekum a fan
i'ma just sit here an tan

he call himself "TheOne", sitin at home tryin to get it done
wit dem 5 word lines he aint got a chance like da Suns
i leave six shots from da 9 in yo baby momma clit
u tryin battle a dis vet, my rhymes leave u spittin grits
dem punches was whack, i aint dead im still rippin yo insides
and fuckin up yo face wit my GAT, smackin u in da back wit my mack
leave u fallen and have yo baby momma callen fo my dick
like u a aint nuthin, bleedin out yo mouth wit a sick
flow u dont know how to spit wit dis vet leave u wishin
u aint tryed spittin wit dis boy, like kobe when he dishin

iight lets get some votes on dis shyt holla

cmon ppl, ur kall me or him, i think we both hit sum good, an i no i didn't do the best, so letz here the feedback

aight my vote is for edub cause he had punches i think that were created for this battle and his sounded more as a blind verse not lines he already had written and the one u need to work on makin ur lines longer and on structure and think of it as all one flow dont divide it up into seperate punches. edub u need to work a lil on flow and punches dont sacrifice a good punch cause it doesnt perfectly fit ur flow

v/edubz

The One, I liked ur flow though your lines were kinda short. You needed to put some personals in ur verse.

DubZ, ur shit was dope and had good punch lines, and you started with a good personal. Since The One had no personals and his lines were short, U get tha vote....

Check out both my battles and drop an honest vote as an exchange for tha fava

thanks westbanka, i respect the feedbak and not sayin u blow quit before u embarass urself ur sumthin, thanks man

Hey One, u tryn to battle me? i really aint all that good, im new here and i wanna see if i gotz wut it takes.

ok how 2 describe dis battle i really can't say much cuz edubz layed it down but theone did have good structure i can say dat but my vote go's 2 edubz

vote=e-dubz

uppin fo votes to finish dis one

lets get some more votes in here

aight, i'll battle u cityboi and/or killeRr but battlin me ain't gonna show if u got wut it takes, i''m like 0-4 on text! FUK!!!! lolz