-C-Explicit vs. TheOne-
 

Alright Here are the Rules

10 Lines
20 Minutes To Spit Them After Checking In
No Crew Votes
No Hate Votes
No Dickriding Votes
No Feeding
No Biting

Best Man Wins..


Good Luck

aight, soundz good so check thiz shyt out

u think ur sum "explicit"
ur nuttin but a miss hit

u kan't hit the ball
not even nik, not at all

it flies by him, just like my rhymes
now hez caught, like in all his crimes

he turnz as he goes to run
then TheOne showz him up wid a gun

ya, ur dead insteada jailed
ur killed insteada nailed

Nice Spit.. Heres Mine.....

Yo your not The One…Imma give you a lyrical handgun--
Please pull the trigger, cause this rappers career is done--
You can’t rap, you think you “Ill” but all you spit is “SARS” --
Imma smoke you in this battle like the Cubans smoke Cigars--
Fuck it please leave this site, cause ure losin this battle tonight --
The only way you’ll win is if you bite, fuckin fake ass pussy cant spit ”tight” —
You need to work on your rhyme, cause what you spit is a crime —
If you was poor on the street freestylin for quarters I wouldn’t give you a dime—
Fuck it this rap is complete, a win for me is concrete—
Cause your lookin at defeat, while im looking down on the clown I beat--

Good Luck..

every body knows who one this

punches:e
flow:e
wordplay:e
structure:e
overall:e

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Thanks for the vote... Im going to up this because i want this over..

hahaha...u killed dis guy...first of all:

The One..you gotta think of betta personals...ur rhymes were hella elementary..but u will get betta if u don't give up...u also gotta think of good vocab and multis..ight..

WHy da hell did u battle him huh??C

atmosphere, thanx for that part whee it said i'd get betta if i didn't quit, i respect that, and thanks for pointin otu wut i did rong

Well i think everyone knows C won this battle.the one need to make his rhyme longer i read ur rhyme in less then 1 min.So u know c won thsi battle but elevate relax and rethink ur shit out before u write it ask ur mom if she thinks it hott lol

Upping For Votes...

yea, One's wus to short,
C' was longer and had a little better vocabulary. ssoo...
my vote goes to C

Flow: C
structurE: C
Personals: C
punches: C
humorus: C

Vote gOes 2 C-explicit...TheOne u need 2 elevate on everything ur lines are 2 short they have no punches jus keep elevatin and u can get bettah ~1~