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(MT)G:Deuce vs Liquor of Tears(AI) Crew Battle
Crew battle 10 lines max Blind Spit (I will spit sometime tommorrow) no feeding no hater, d/r, or crew votes Spit when you feel like it man, good luck |
check.. im a busy busy man... so ill be droppin... tonight or tomorrow.
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Ight here it is, Lets do dis LOT
Inverted his spleen, this nervous drag-queen didn’t get MADE Nasty with his mouth? Only when he got caught spitting out ADDS Relinquish Pain and get slain by rhymes soon as my verbs connect Decapitate this wigga, and have him speaking the rest of his lines through his neck Your lyrics aint hot no more, you just another Ghost of a Love Forgotten Went from weak to poetry, now he mad cause his battle record’s fined, penalized for stopp’n (Think about it) Accomplishment lost to you! I told him not to get so close to his ink pen. (Smelling dat ink) He can’t say that he didn’t get most of his wins from newbs, who the hell was K-Trin! Poetic saints can only fit in soap operas and Blind date shows He could make this "rape" (instead of rap) battle into a poem but still couldn’t find his “Love Below” Bring your real shit |
haha iight here it is.Quickly keyed...
Kel Kimbells Twin?..That why you think you're 'all that'?(show Kel used to be on) When your verses all the same like siamese cats. You're just the second hand man, a lyrical caddy. How can you call yourself a graphics head with that wack avy? You call yourself death, When im diggin your grave deeper I can't name one good person you beat, So i dub thee 'Newb Reaper' I got such a grip on you now, I'm developin blisters Drop the mic, Or better yet... hand it back to your sister |
ight, uppin for votes.....................................
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yeah im uppin toooo
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Good drop by both..........................
up Votes. |
aiight lot took this battle in my eyes because the other dude had a few good lines i wasnt really feeling the physical disses in his verse ei: talking about decapitating his neck..lol wtf? aslo g deuce your lines were too stretched man it shouldnt really matter in a text battle but it kind of does..
lot-better disses i think that you should have had a few more lines but the ones you had were better than g deuces i think.. line about his sister was funny also nice personals vote- lot |
ok check tight battle
gdeuce your opener was a nice set up line but punch...... nothin really your closer again nice set up line but punch wasnt really good it was ight but nothin much an the rest of your verse was plain dis on accomplishment was pointless to me some shit was nice some multies but punchs an personals werent that strong to me lot your opener was ight didnt really hit hard to me personal in 1st line was ight your closer was sick lmfaooooo damn... tight personal best shit outthe whole battle nice way to end shit an the rest of your verse was pretty nice some complex shit and good punchs and personals i think every set had a personal almost al lwhere nice an thats what gets my vote vote lot nice battle i think his personals killed it though both stay up |
LoT-Nice spit........You came good with the personals with it which means you took this
really by a lil though......you had everything uncluding similies and metaphores..Balacance was ok.....just work on a few things and ya will be there...... G:Deuce-Came aight and good....Work on something, structure was ok but work on some thing.....Multies Definitly need more work.....But keep elevatin and work v/Lot Becuz of personals |
A'ight...this is anotha hot battle. Both dawgz spit fire...LoT had slightly better flow, but both had some nice punches. Nice werk from both. G Duece, your structure needs some werk dawg...and I think LoT had slightly better punches as well.
Vote- LoT No hate. |
Ok ....1 more vote this should end.
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Aight G deuce needs to work in his sturcture and i hate that center shit but - his style was not really veteran it was more herbish i did think G took vocab but i think lot took it in punches & PERSONALS which you know i like this battle was weak but LoT came harder sorry FAM most respect to both of you
V/LoT. |
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