Killerr vs. ThaOne
 

CMon thaone, lets do this, show me wut u ggott!!!

Where is he at? Could you call this a forfit?//
Or did his electricty go out? cause he couldnt afford it//
He better come back, that fat ass lil hoe//
No matter wut he does, my Records 1-0//
When i win this battle what do I do?//
I aint gonna look better, runnin around "I BEAT NEWB!!!"//
I guess ima have to play it kool, and move on to better MC's//
Some People that are worth, for me to pull out my Weaponry!!/

Fuck it, ayo lets just start vote'n I guess, I told em, he had Half hour after 11:30pm to write his shit and i'd reply, but looks like he aint tryn to write.

Fuck it, ayo lets just start vote'n I guess, I told em, he had Half hour after *****10:30pm***** to write his shit and i'd reply, but looks like he aint tryn to write. My bad, edited mystake from ^.

dude, u neva tol' me shyt, if u wanted to battle pm me

first of all i don't puss out
so don't worry, i ain't givin u the easy way out
i think i'll lay it down on you
u get so mad that ur baby ass face turnz blue
an wutz that comin out? a tear
quit, come bak an try me anutha year
meanwhile, i'll be here tryin to beat CHALLENGERZ
also, i think i'll eat a pussy whuile i have ma ball in ur mutherz

oh shit maw fuka, itz ballz in last line, lolz, letz get sum votez now ppl!

this battle is hard to hit but I have to go with kelleRr becuase he rhymed more, had more personels in it, and his closure put this all away but hey I hit up on this so someone hit up on this peace.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127480

ayo that was def. killers battle, more rhyming. and better punchlines. im out peace.

killer takes this for me. he had better punchlines and rhyming. the ones seemed very rushed, spend more time on it next time homie u got potential.

ps. please vote in my battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128605 thanks a lot.

not the one
 

sorry but killer has this one my opion, the one, you seemed like your punches were forced out of you just work on it youll get better...

killerr took this
he had some good punches to me a good
flow and all but needs a better structure
there was to much con-junction
in it but all good