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verbal violence vs.. $ik
yo rules as in call out u spit firsty aight holla bak~1~
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................ i didn't fuckin call out to yo shit...wtf is this shit...
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8 Lines (4 BaRz) <--don't go under 8 lines..or over it... no d/r, gay votes, crew votes (if ur in one), hate votes, etc... Must Spit b4... Thursday... Aight...Check It... As I Pre-sist To Abduct Your Obsolete Mental, And Prefrom Multiple Expirement's Of Pathogenasis Peel Back Your Epidermis, Causing Enternal-Torture, Should'nt Have Fucked With This Mad Scientist The Diseases I'm Spittin' Could Never Be CURE-d, I'm Weakening You Life With My Every Word Straight Contaminate Your Bloodstream, I Heard That You Thinkin You Gonna Win..That Shit's Absurd I'm The Definiton Of Your Destruction, Causin' You Cerebral Damage, As If It Was Paint That You Was Huffin' Like A Volcanic Eruption, I'll Leave Your Mind Scortched, Burnt, Like The Evil Devil's Corruption I Write Immaculate Word's, I'm Straight Causin' Your Brain Several Strategically-Placed Tactical Burnz A Fraction Of My Power Is What You Yearn, You May Be Undefeated, But Im Gonna End That Power-Surge |
ight yo check it
yo u say i didnt start well you might get yo heart carved out of bullet holes my shit is truly spiritual highly lyrical never drop me never top me invading yo privacy like some poperotci cuz use just a muthafuka who must start bleedin and a muthafuka i must hit when im creepin while u sleepin a dead soul is what im seekin but if I catch you you knees start to weakin then I hit you with the venom that yo body cant handle get yo hole body dismantled wreckin shit like im a mutafukin vandle I'll have you boilin like lard tear you up like a cedit card if you cant hang then just admit that battlin me is so hard now yall vote ight~1~ |
yo I WILL check it out when he drops but can u guys check out this battle plz.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127480 |
Im gonna have to give this 1 to $ik i think he was better in everything beside structure..struc is not gonna win a battle verbal i think u need to elevate and u will be better iight
Drop a vote on thisbattle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127691 |
weak verses by both textcees.. in a battle you want to diss your opponent not have a bunch of lines talking about killing them.. but really i felt like $ik had some pretty decent wordplay.. i felt like verbal violence had some elementary lines i wasnt really feling anything in his verse
vote- $ik |
Sik you came pretty decent with your punches they were okay...Wordplay was also decent...But it seems you came kinda weak but you still win cuz you did way better then Verbal...Now Verbal..Your structure kinda needs some work...plus your verse wasn't good ...you had punches but really didnt hit hard .....so elevate...
v/Sik i will poll my vote , once you hit my battle in da Sig.... |
iight $ik had betta everythin da structure was off but dat aint wut wins battles i like $ik's punches and flow
v/$ik |
punches: sik
creativity: sik origanality: sik personals: VV stucture: sik my vote go's to sik all tha way, punches hit harder it flowed and it wus creative.. - hit up a battle in my sig, drop a vote vote : sik |
weak verses by both textcees.. in a battle you want to diss your opponent not have a bunch of lines talking about killing them.. but really i felt like $ik had some pretty decent wordplay.. i felt like verbal violence had some elementary lines i wasnt really feling anything in his verse
vote- $ik |
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