TheOne vs. Mixtape
 

10-18 Lines
Due An Hour
No Crew
No Hate
No d/r
No Bitein
U spittin first

Checkin In.....Ill Drop soon.......................

hey i will check out this battle when he drops but can u guys vote on this battle 2 thnx.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127480

aight man, i'll be waitin if it don't take too long, if it does i'll spit later

i'll spit weneva i get off work, i gotz to go in like...10min

This battle collide Iam here to wreck you with rhymes...
Right after nine eleven I still perplexed u with crime…
Stop at ensembles cuz your voice sounds like shit on a track...
That's why after 3 years there's no audios you're a bitch and you're wack…
You Filthy Rich nah... cuz you can't afford studio time…
You say mainstream cats bite you... but is that truly your rhyme?…
Talk about a meteor shower,I rock your girls world like I was one…
First battle between us I’am at medium power,excelling vertical…
Above your sight like paramecium prowlers, I'm featuring proud words…
In the streets you'd throw the towel in, complaints and outbursts…
Emanatin from you, till the muscles in your face and mouth hurt…
Separate your trousers, nobody present to fuck me up,you're now served…
You just recieved a sentence, count the jurors…
I’am the best in dis And I'm all about the words…
If you refuse to show the evidence, then regroup your flow and refute the blow…
If you won, I'd simply choose to go... to your mothers house and renew the show…
You should've known never to battle me,now feelin a cock to your throat…
Hardly accident prone, not the best but savage and too close to G.O.A.T…

Now.....Come on drop your verse.....

Aight, so u think ur Mr. This
U shoulda not challeneged me and went for a piss
U kall urself MixTape
I'd say Mr.Rape
kuz thatz the only way u kan get any
but if u new me, u'd no i get plenty
just like how i get respect
i don't do shit i regret
thatz y i'm takin you
itz just like me wearin red, an u blue
blood vs. crip bitch, u got no hope
kuz i'm straight amazin afta i smoked ma dope
and i did, so itz like battlin a burnin line
keep on climbin bitch, kuz that linez mine
so liike i said keep climbin, i'ma sit here an keep rhymin
then i turn to my right, ma eyes bust open, an start signin
for the line of people thatz goin down ma street
then i move kuz sumthinz burnin, hm.... too much heat

Uppin(1)....Vote People ....Leave Link If Ya Want....

Uppin (2)....Vote People Cmon...Leave A Link If Ya Want....

Aight im goin wit MIXTAPE.. he had an overall better spit...

TheOne - Elevate man, work on ya punches, and personals.. start with those, and when you get good at them incorperate things such as Multis and wordplay.. get down the basics firs..

MIXTAPE - You took this no doubt.. good spit.. overall you came A lot better then One... u got my vote...

Return Tha Favor With An Honest One..
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...272#post1325272

Uppin(3).....Vote People Cmon...Leave a Link If Ya Want.....

Mixtape you had a decent spit, it was good enough to get the victory. good struct punches and flow not great tho.
Theone-one of ur best spits ive seen, elevated better since our battle, keep workin on usin metaphors and extendin ur lines they give u more space fo a reason.aight dawg

v=mix

Uppin(4)....Cmon Vote People VOTE....Leave a link if ya want...

goin fo mixtape on dis 1,got mo betta punch linez then ONE so mixtape u have my vote!!!

Mixtape your verse was decent. Your punches were well done, and they hit harder then TheOne. Your structure was okay, but you should work on fixing it up cuz some lines were streched. TheOne, you new so you just learning to rap and shit, but it wasnt good at all but you just gotta elevate man. But Mixtape got my vote for better punches and a better verse.

vote- Mixtape
Just look for my battle against Macka.