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Suicide
Preponderate of suicide is hot as it is cold but blocked like masonry, Conesentrate motions at blade point consider left over basically, Reiterate feelings run high the trail of thought quicker than blaze, Matsatbate "wrong and Write" witnesses stand, stair eyes glazed, Suicide contrasts fear and hate precipitate exit is blade sether, Collide energy and mimic like textbook jump to save but survive NEVER, Minimize fact with fiction to die is a life time off unhappiness Revised in unwillingness, contained like liquid a pitray forfilness, Scorn of consequences and resort to 9mm to resolve tourcher And wish to be-reborn in a new world of satisfaction, leave by slaughter, Imagination runs like gunfire in situation fired once and followed by others, Notion end iternaty, feared followed through with strong minds. No lovers? Suicide resorted by unspoken minds concealed anger to hatred, Un reported failure to compete acts of bravery shown like sun debated, Expelled student reckless bulling damages his ego un-respectively, Suicide ruthless way to conclude the adventure as simple as poverty, Convicted thurthless hoimes sent to high courts but we put Sue-a-side, Death of loved family, freinds and enemy bring us closer when Tightens COLIDE..... |
nice drop
got a lot of feeling in it u had a nice flow and structure in it and u used some nice wordplay in there only problem was i found a couple of spelling mistakes but that ain't really anything big other than that nice drop!! OVERALL 7/10 |
cheers dawg....^^^uppin for more feed back...holla
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hexen this just aint fair u hog all the spot light lol just drop 1 bad verse so we can finally critisize u becauase this shit is just to damn good lol i was feelin it keep it comin......
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cheers bro...apreseate the love..aiight..uppin
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upp ....
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yo good shyt hexen...really complex but still a good read...raw emotion was in this and it looked like you worked hard on this and it came our nice...vocab was topnotch.. strong piece...good drop keep em coming ~!1!~
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Seriously dude............u are sick in open mics. strong fuckin piece.
U jacked my steez dammit....Translation..my spotlight..lol Nice drop deep and emotions was felt. dont commit any suicide now ok |
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