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Jitters
Jitters Cold vibes shudder down my spine my vision bleak, To Turn This Corner im scared as much as im weak, Mind runs cold to contemplate what lies beneath, I redeem confidents to seek a vision of believe, As I Turn to this hatred corner my mind freezes Over; the figure that confronts me wishes not pleases, As I fear for my life my life is in fear, Bemused as time as I clock time stands still, Of jitters;im scared but fearless as my lips seal, Is This Fo’real ,my mind week trying to concealed, My Body Runs but not movement just emotions Straining my hart like a tea bag; Improvement of Devotions, A fear invading my body like an infection, This Story tells NO lies than a reflection, Pulse increases a I feel my veins fill with vessels, Pumping more Adrenalin as each blink wrestles, Clenching my fists to numb this dark fear, Less Jitters when a gal gave me more head than beer, Running for safety my arms collapse in two, Looking around I hallucinate resize jitters as a clue Channel anger into a way off life and fear no more concern, Because when the feelings back, back is the feeling to burn… |
that was some deep shyt i was def feelin it keep it comin............................................. ..
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aiight.....cheers bro...uppin
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*wipes tear from eye* damn, i'm proud.
- The images here were very nice, supreme to others on this site infact. You actually had beauty with words here, you finally managed to pull of constant and imaculate poetic techniques within your work. Your rhyme scheme was wack as fuck and also the sylable count was off.Honest as it comes there. Lyircally though, its dope. |
uppin...thanks for da love..
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uppin
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good shit real deep & i felt ur pain 2 da fullest keep it cummin
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aiight..cheers upp
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please leave feed back....
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ok dis is vvv slept on
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