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HeXen 06-02-04 11:38 AM

Jitters
 
Jitters


Cold vibes shudder down my spine my vision bleak,
To Turn This Corner im scared as much as im weak,
Mind runs cold to contemplate what lies beneath,
I redeem confidents to seek a vision of believe,
As I Turn to this hatred corner my mind freezes
Over; the figure that confronts me wishes not pleases,
As I fear for my life my life is in fear,
Bemused as time as I clock time stands still,
Of jitters;im scared but fearless as my lips seal,
Is This Fo’real ,my mind week trying to concealed,
My Body Runs but not movement just emotions
Straining my hart like a tea bag; Improvement of Devotions,
A fear invading my body like an infection,
This Story tells NO lies than a reflection,
Pulse increases a I feel my veins fill with vessels,
Pumping more Adrenalin as each blink wrestles,
Clenching my fists to numb this dark fear,
Less Jitters when a gal gave me more head than beer,
Running for safety my arms collapse in two,
Looking around I hallucinate resize jitters as a clue
Channel anger into a way off life and fear no more concern,
Because when the feelings back, back is the feeling to burn…






Soul Sickness 06-02-04 11:42 AM

that was some deep shyt i was def feelin it keep it comin............................................. ..

HeXen 06-02-04 12:08 PM

aiight.....cheers bro...uppin

Genie 06-02-04 12:36 PM

*wipes tear from eye* damn, i'm proud.

- The images here were very nice, supreme to others on this site infact. You actually had beauty with words here, you finally managed to pull of constant and imaculate poetic techniques within your work. Your rhyme scheme was wack as fuck and also the sylable count was off.Honest as it comes there. Lyircally though, its dope.

HeXen 06-02-04 06:02 PM

uppin...thanks for da love..

HeXen 06-03-04 06:06 AM

uppin

HeXen 06-04-04 12:38 PM

uppin

HeXen 06-05-04 06:09 AM

upp

Loose Canon 06-05-04 09:47 AM

good shit real deep & i felt ur pain 2 da fullest keep it cummin

HeXen 06-05-04 10:03 AM

aiight..cheers upp

HeXen 06-06-04 06:16 AM

please leave feed back....

HeXen 06-07-04 12:31 PM

upp

HeXen 06-08-04 03:38 PM

upp

HeXen 06-09-04 10:50 AM

ok dis is vvv slept on


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