outsider vs DeaDly RhymeZ 01
 

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i Spit first

And if u dont Check in by

Thursday D'qd 1

No Feeding off my verse Nither i spit first Checkkin in

ok checking in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yo When i Spit It Will Leave u Lyricaly + Trapt +...
Cuz MY Punches Damage You And Leave ya hole body + Snaped +...
I Will Inpravise and Cause THis Fool to lose Like * Pacers *...
You're Still a Little Kid The Way u play wit Men and Black * Lazers *...
So now u MAde The Big Mistake By Takein a Step Up To + Me +
Make shure u Bleed, Then Lets Juss Shatter This + Emcee +
I Will Leave This Outsider Done But Try not to Hurt * Him *
But First He Messed Up Steppin up 2 me imma Rip up his * Skin *
So Let This Be A Lesson OutSider Neva Do Dis + Again +...
This is One of those Verses that makes n00bs forget 2 + Send +

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deadly rhymes, your gettin softened by the thickness of my lyrics/
ready mind about to terminate you, leave you freshned wid my tactics/
watch me rip into this bitch control you and do things to you in reaction/
like tickerling your fanny hole givin u a sensation with a 10 foot pole/
this bitch is having an early buryal, putting you into da biggest ditch/
the witch got a thing about talent, so im here to give her the tradgerdy/
i'll hang you on top of some swings wrapped around several times/
watch the blood vessals burst open, gushing blood watchin the grass stain/
you don't diserve to be on dis planet got a big mouth bigger den ya hole/
so let me do ya a favour, or help somone who really does want rid of you/
your shitty words, refelect off mine, getting after effects of iternal illness/
words shooting bullets like a m9 maching gun guttin up my buisness/
remeber, i'll always be here and when i die gonna take u wid me/
when dat happens, i'll be takein your reletives when it happens/

deadly u got my vote so holla!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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hmm, im voting for deadly, his flow and punches were alot better...Outsider i didnt understand alot of what you was sayin, but overall deadly won this for sure

better flow, better punches, id say outsider got him on wordplay cuz he was playin wit them werds kinda wacky but thats it

V/Deadly

Balla HAndles Say why i wont Explaine it better i Said no Un-Explained Votes so Explain it

polll the vote C-Qunce

Sorry but Deadly had this.. all i gatta say is at least he rhymed in the battle.... my vote goes to deadly..


vote deadly

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closed deadly ripped him

deadly-

bestline-I Will Inpravise and Cause THis Fool to lose Like * Pacers *...
You're Still a Little Kid The Way u play wit Men and Black * Lazers *...


nice

worsteline-none

outsider

bestline-none barley rhymeing

worsteline-alot

winner-deadly rhymez

lol..
 

Yeah homie, the other cat was goin to bring punches in wit the whole 10 ft pole i was expectin a good start but it never got started n the punches where consistent enough..

Lines that stook out for me for the vote:

I Will Inpravise and Cause THis Fool to lose Like * Pacers *...
You're Still a Little Kid The Way u play wit Men and Black * Lazers *...
So now u MAde The Big Mistake By Takein a Step Up To + Me +
Make shure u Bleed, Then Lets Juss Shatter This + Emcee +

Lol the lasers was pretty funny, nothin crazy but enough for the vote..

Vote: Deadly

Return the favor through some of the battles in bitch slapped..

Same here outsider you didnt even rhyme.I mean damn,you suck or just try harder is all Im saying.

deadly you definately took this battle...your verse wasnt hott tho it was jus str8... you had a couple good punches the rest were decent...your structure was nice and your flow was consistent... you had 1 bar that didnt really rhyme but it didnt affect your verse much...

overall: 6/10

outsider your verse was just bad about 95% of it didnt even rhyme so there was no sense in even posting that... you had punches but when it doesnt rhyme then its not a battle more like a spoken diss instead of a spoken rhyme thats where you messed up.. some of your bars were stretched and/or forced and your wordplay wasnt too good you need to elevate in alot of areas

vote: deadly rhymez 01

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