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DON 06-02-04 03:49 PM

DON <VS> vinman
 
aight 10 lines
no feeding
no cheating
u drop first
i neva meant u were scared u jus didnt reply so good luck pc

vinman 06-02-04 04:32 PM

i know you didint mean but whats make you think im good im not good im okay i screw u0p sometimes i think u way beta than me but if you want to battle lets go










the don hell naw more like the pussy ass nigga/ i dont see how you the godfather when you can even pull the trigger/my flow is dangerous to minors like you and people who cant rap/im doing a number on yo skull no where to run you TRAPED/ the don play with retared kids if you think about it hes one too// because all my fans shouted DONT FACE VINMAN AND HE DIDINT TAKE THE CLUE(DUMBASS)/my flow deadly its strike fear into many people cuse my shit is tight hell/ but thats also where i sending the don after im done striking his head with a nail/ hes been calling me out for some arpperent reason/this battle is like his lights they turn every other season/i hate to be the bara of bad news/ but nigga you suck..... give it up...... the crowd boos....................




for get them dots at the end i need to make it 10 lines sorry

DON 06-02-04 05:23 PM

aight heres my verse

whos my next victim from the dark knights, uh-oh its vinamn...
cant think of your punches so i give you brains like the tinman...
and afta the battle the bitch knights collect your pieces in bags...
they bury your ass in the dirt as low and deep as your girls tits sag...
i can sink my balls in your girls hole more precise than usin a putter...
i slid in that loose shit like a warm knife slides through butter...
ill send this dark knight back to registration at the start...
give you open chest surgery cause ur rhymes got no heart...
i cant believe u call urself a clan or a crew...
cause even them oompa loompas had better skill than you...

aight lets get some votes

Mafia Soldier 06-02-04 05:45 PM

Mafia Soldier
 
Aight tis battle was OK nuthin too amazing>>>>>To break it down Vinman was right.... he do mess up ex.I don't see how u Godfather when u can even pull the trigger, Well if he Godfather I'd hope he can pull tha trigger. And the start of it was weak. Their were some good parts thought toward the end, but too little too late!!!! keep spitn' and defend your crew, tha DON's mass murderin' u guys!!!!

Tha DON was better wit his punches and better flow. I like how he busts on not only Vinman but his whole crew. It looks like a one man war!!!I also like how tha DON uses similes and metaphores!!!! Yo Vinman try usin' some of those!!!

Vote goes to Tha DON!!!!!

vinman 06-02-04 05:52 PM

uppin for votes

vinman 06-02-04 05:55 PM

uppin for real votes

DON 06-02-04 06:07 PM

uppin some more lets get some more honest votes on here pc

vinman 06-02-04 06:11 PM

uppin pls want honest votes

DON 06-02-04 06:22 PM

come on lets get some votes on here dont let this sleep

e-dubz 06-02-04 06:31 PM

iight don had betta punches and flow..vinman u had iight punches and not so good flow so i gotta give it to don he had a nice opener too
v/don

J Gutta 06-02-04 06:32 PM

aight vinman u elevatin but u gotta elevate much more aihgt b..but yur verse was aight but iam not likin tha paragraph format

DON u had a better verse all out..better punches...better flow...better structure err thing

v/don

J Gutta 06-02-04 06:32 PM

aight vinman u elevatin but u gotta elevate much more aihgt b..but yur verse was aight but iam not likin tha paragraph format

DON u had a better verse all out..better punches...better flow...better structure err thing

v/don

J Gutta 06-02-04 06:33 PM

my bad it posted twice.....can yall delte wun or sumthin....

DON 06-02-04 06:51 PM

aight thanks for the feedback uppin for some more votes

vinman 06-02-04 09:36 PM

yea watever i lose uppin for votes


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