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Kre-z Vs (punkass) Outsider
usual rules 10-20 lines check in due
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ok den start your 20 lines of bullshit when your ready, im fucking checking in bitch.
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ONly in waynes world will you ever defeat me
I keep a record of my battles and see Whats this, last time you couldn't beat Kre-z Aww little punk couldn't take a loss Try to elevate, talkin bout money like he floss Say you murder like you commit homicide If I was you I'd commit suicide Say I sound like bizzar oh hell naw Cause you sound like puffy in a Spar By some frozen steak let it brake hard Eat it, cause thats the only way you'll be raw Talkin bout you kill niggaz like you scarface Last time we rhymed I couldn't find a lyric in the whole damn place You start beef, cause I spoke the truth Yo punk ass just speak and you lose You ain't elevating FineMind ya game is slippin Look through ya hard drive geek, find ya pre-writtens |
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hey ill come back when he drps but can u guys drop in this battle it has been open for a long time peace.
caramelcookie214@hotmail.com |
Outsiders being a little bitch and not showing up.
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your the worst mc ever... undercover, i'll kill your mutha, just because you love-her/
Bad lyrics should be branded on your name, see how da fuck can u call urself an emcee/ this punk told me to stop the violence, dis guys fucked up and got no respect/ stop-bitchin cause i got my ass out for-kissing get bitch slapped cuz ur a reject/ ur lyrics are 2 small, like your dick in whole, don't be ashamed/ speacially when your muthas likin it and tryin to swallow/ your shit is wack just take da shit back, and agree it lacks/ cause my words just bounce back at ya like tenis rackets/ by da way the comment about bizarr... thats you retarded/ you make him look good really... actually you could be related/ im an mc killer a kre dismantler... you've never met someone as talented/ i'll have your lungs hung on a car thats just bin tawned/ busted open gushing in blood changing the colour of my lawn/ this is gettin personal, becoming internal, you couldn't follow me up if u was a gernal/ lyrics depressed, bein compressed, weighing you down like a fuckin stampeed/ mutha fucker better stop fronting, before i burn your house down wen i find ur adress/ this bitch didn't put any punches down, he musta forgot, wat a cock/ if he did i'd only come back twice as harder, makin ur ass even more mocked/ this is almost over anyway... bein put icolated like cast away, so you can't rap or play/ this shit has been ripped at ya, better change your dyper... you mighta shit yaself/ |
Sorry Krez but outsider won this his structure was fucked up but i guess he came harder plus h edid more lines you should have done 10 lines max Krez had basic rhymes and some of those punches was fillers...
Talkin bout you kill niggaz like you scarface There was no word play in this line.. Outsides came better with punches vocab & flow in this althought i still dint think he verse was good but he came harder than you ... peace |
Uppin for votes ^^^^^Dickrider he didn't even rhyme
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kre-z
ure spit did not flow well at all, ure structure was fucked up cuz u had far too many stretched lines and some really short ones. u had no hard hittin punches whatsoever and u lacked in personals to. u had some played out lines and really just had nuthin original. OVERALL 5/10 outsider u came pretty weak but u came better than kre-z. i think ure flow was gud in places but really fucked up and choppy in other places. ure structure too needs work, u need to keep ure shit together man. u had sum aight punches but nuthin hard hittin and u two need to work on ure personals and get some originality into ure drop. ure just usin basic played out shit most of the time. OVERALL 6/10 V/ - outsider |
upping for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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funny krez called me a dick rider WHEN he voted 4 me and i dint vote for him u cant get in CS u suck...
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Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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aight Outsider takes this even though he didn't rhyme he came
much more harder in punches than Kre-z, flow was in none of their favour, vocab tie, and the rest for me is undecided......and u can't call me a d/r because he voted against me in another battle.... aight so do a honest vote on my battle with Lover Boy the link's in my signature... |
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GOD DAMN U WON A BATTLE........outsider took this..even with all his alias`s fine mind...popa doc etc.
dnt get 2 excited though dawg..........none of your lines rhmed as allways u need to rhyme still boy other cat woz very weak..no structure,,,,no nothin elevate advice--u cnt rhyme words either...but u prob hve a brain so if u can jus get your words to rhyme nxt time u`ll beat outsider guaranteed....... vote-i cnt believe it im gona vote 4 outsider!!!!1 |
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