SmArTzZ vs punchlineprince
 

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G'l

ima destroy thiz femonem emcee,wit hard punches daat'll be crushing ya teeth
leaving u dekapitated stuck under beneath,cuz i got a betta flow den boats on the sea
u the punchline prince ay? well u aint causing harm 2 me,u wak dont u agree?
wen the heat makin u burn to the 3rd dergree,and i wont loose,
and wen i win i dun wanna hear no ezcuse,cuz weak rapz u produce,

....so wit the sound of the tone.,juss leave it alone,
leavin ya carcus in the ground wit molded bonez,..and a broken neck,
wit flamez leavin u drippin sweat,beatin u doen leaving u a wreck..

...cuz i stay on top,spit sick leavin u green like rodger clotz,
untill u sizzle in pop,spittin 4 shizzle y diz faggot dropz..

and i aint a fan u kno,i got da band wit flow..
and put a shell to ya back like michael angelo(frm ninja turtles)

i waz rushing so i got a few mistakes

Can u believe he classified his location/
Prolly because hes at he masturbatin,and dont really want no altercation/
And speakin of masterbation,...this dude is wack/
And he wacks to that gay triple x in his backpack/
However gave u tha name smartzz waz either dead or sick/
Cuz judgin from ya grammar you dummer than a bag of bricks/
And get that penicillin away from me/
Cuz my lyrical spit is too sick so i must be elderly/
And I know whats up with tha sonic picture/
It symbolizes How fast you can run if i ever tried 2 come and get cha/

uppin for votes
:shoot:

uppi 4 votes

can ppl vote please

i have to go with smartzz his flow was better he had better personals, and he had more comedy in it and his closure helped him to close it well. so my vote goes to smartzz.

alright close battle.. but smartzz was more in depth... prince you were real basic... better punches by smartzz... so i gotta go with smartzz

iight uppin 4 votes

prince you got no punch lines stop thinkin you do

that was wack man period this was a sonning

you should be his bitch now prince

v/ smartzz

iight can ppl vote please

weak...wack...battle

first smart

ima destroy thiz femonem emcee,wit hard punches daat'll be crushing ya teeth
leaving u dekapitated stuck under beneath,cuz i got a betta flow den boats on the sea

^^ femonem = feminine?...aiight

I feel u tryna come with the punches and metas...they needs serious work though...focus on making the metaphors connect with the punches

12/20


Can u believe he classified his location/
Prolly because hes at he masturbatin,and dont really want no altercation/
And speakin of masterbation,...this dude is wack/
And he wacks to that gay triple x in his backpack/


^^ Too simple with little complexity...add metas/wordplay to your punches


10/20


Vote: Smar

this was kinda wack
but here is how it breaks down
smartzz
u won easily but you have to step it up
aight?
it cam down to punchlines
and that you won so thats why im voting for u
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structure both of yall need to work on dat
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punchline prince u need to work on flow strucutre and personals
punches are why u lost this battle u have no good punches
ur name doesnt work out
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my vote smartz cuz of stronger and more efficient punchlines