G Deuce vs Killah Bwoy
 

Rules:
10-15 lines
no d/r votes
no crew votes
no hater votes

check in before spitting


Checkity Check

checkin in...i aint gon underestimate you cause i know your good....good luck doe fam

Lets go nigga...FUCKS GOOD..ITS GAME FUCKIN OVA FAM..BLOWW!!!!!!


Rip Open your splean..Lookin at your av is the only time you see green-
Glued Everyones eyeballs to ya ass cheeks..and ur "shit still aint seen"-
Your Rhymes are just a joke..only takes 1 line to emberass you
Talkin bout u floatin to the top of the charts..rip open your parachute-

AIIGHT AIIGHT AIIGHT..IMMA SPIT SOMETHIN INTELLIGENT

Beatin me!..I wish you luck..Rip Out Your Ribs so you can kiss the dust-
Kid's gotta dickrider express card..but all your d/r's just missed-the-bus-
aint goin nowhere bitin gunit101's shit..but hey!..you are what you eat-
guns missed ur heel but lines ripped em off..have you "missin your feet"-
When he saw elton john he ran up to him like"hey man im G-ay 2-
like brittney in her toxic video..i can see the bitch right through you-

HAHA YOU THOUGHT I WAS DONE..IMMA FINISH THIS BITCH

Pop n' blast gats....like da mario bullets lemme see you get passed that-
leave ya ass flat....spoken "point"'ll deflate ya n' get rid of your ass fat-
Burnt to crisp..<-thats what the detective said when i burnt you, Bitch-
slit your wrist..on that young couple and devorce break up type shit-
Just So Sick...dis "dawg" Spits poisonous venom..so betta not get licked-


aiight this is gonna be hard for some of yall to udnerstand so imma break it down
When he saw elton john he ran up to him like"hey man im G-ay 2-
elton johns gay and "deuce" means "2"

like brittney in her toxic video..i can see the bitch right through you-
she had some shit where you could see her tits right through her clothes

Pop n' blast gats....like da mario bullets lemme see you get passed that-
remember the old school super mario game..those big ass bullets that they shot and it was almost impossible to get passed dem??

slit your wrist..on that young couple and devorce break up type shit-
you know those young couples when they just break up they wanna split their wrist and kill theirselve n shit...

AND IM OUT

*BOOOM*

Killah, really tight drop man. So here is my muthafucka,

Genetically imposed by terms, words enforcing demise at anytime.
Force my bars down his throat but still couldn’t “read between the lines.”
I’ll plaster your mind, lines reflecting the sense of this fool
Lacerate your spine and use the “columns” as a “Stepstool”
Cause my level exceeds the norm, I inform gods of pain.
Bury his rhymes “publicly” and let him receive his “15 seconds of Fame.”
Subtract half his “brain”, when I insanely drop bars like rugged “scalpels”
Engulf my terminology but he still couldn’t settle for just a “mouthful.”
Splatter his brain on canvas, “A picture paints a thousand words”
Tried to Visualize him winning, but couldn’t see past the blur.
When I consume terms, and position a verbal surprise attack.
Then lyrically spit "knowledge" so Killa couldn't "think" to fight back.
Your rhymes are wack, just realize you took the "L" on this big time
Do I have to explain why he was giving hints to find his punchlines? (Hmmm...)

wooooooooooooooooooooo ^^^^^^^^ thats some fuckin fire right there...knew you was gon spit fire..but not naepalms..wHOA

Rip Open your splean..Lookin at your av is the only time you see green-
Glued Everyones eyeballs to ya ass cheeks..and ur "shit still aint seen"-
Your Rhymes are just a joke..only takes 1 line to emberass you
Talkin bout u floatin to the top of the charts..rip open your parachute-

^^ Good opener..One correction...GALL BLADDER makes you see green...lol

Beatin me!..I wish you luck..Rip Out Your Ribs so you can kiss the dust-
Kid's gotta dickrider express card..but all your d/r's just missed-the-bus-


^^ Not so sure I get the DUST part...but the 2nd line is good

Burnt to crisp..<-thats what the detective said when i burnt you, Bitch-
slit your wrist..on that young couple and devorce break up type shit-
Just So Sick...dis "dawg" Spits poisonous venom..so betta not get licked-

^^^ decent lines...

**pretty hard hitting...not much to critique...maybe up wordplay

25/30


Genetically imposed by terms, words enforcing demise at anytime.
Force my bars down his throat but still couldn’t “read between the lines.”

^^^^ HERE'S SOME ADVICE...DON'T GIVE YOUR OPPONENT PROPS BEFORE YOU SPIT..perhaps after...but never before..it's like you're conceding the battle in my opinion

this line is played...

When I consume terms, and position a verbal surprise attack.
Then lyrically spit "knowledge" so Killa couldn't "think" to fight back.
Your rhymes are wack, just realize you took the "L" on this big time
Do I have to explain why he was giving hints to find his punchlines? (Hmmm...)


^^ good attempt at metas/wordplay in your punches...but they don't connect like intended...

20/30


Vote: Killa

Killa:

Rip Open your splean..Lookin at your av is the only time you see green-
Glued Everyones eyeballs to ya ass cheeks..and ur "shit still aint seen"-

^^nice personal and opener.


Beatin me!..I wish you luck..Rip Out Your Ribs so you can kiss the dust-
Kid's gotta dickrider express card..but all your d/r's just missed-the-bus-

^^Made me laugh but it was nicely put together..nice punch


Duece:

Genetically imposed by terms, words enforcing demise at anytime.
Force my bars down his throat but still couldn’t “read between the lines.”

^^^hhahaha....lol


Your rhymes are wack, just realize you took the "L" on this big time
Do I have to explain why he was giving hints to find his punchlines?

^^Ouch!!...and he did explain his punches..lol

Damn this was nice battle but i have to go whoever had betta punches cuz i didnt see alot of personals...since i kno both of you..nice battle by both homeys.

V/: Duece....punches were complex...eventhough both had some self-grofication and shit..killah had fillers ..thats what messed em up.

uppin for real and honest votes for dis shit........................

still uppin for real, explained, honest votes for dis shit

still uppin for more votes.........................

Rip Open your splean..Lookin at your av is the only time you see green-
Glued Everyones eyeballs to ya ass cheeks..and ur "shit still aint seen"-
Your Rhymes are just a joke..only takes 1 line to emberass you
Talkin bout u floatin to the top of the charts..rip open your parachute-
^Decent Opener With Nice Multies' ..!!!!!! 8/10

Beatin me!..I wish you luck..Rip Out Your Ribs so you can kiss the dust-
Kid's gotta dickrider express card..but all your d/r's just missed-the-bus-
aint goin nowhere bitin gunit101's shit..but hey!..you are what you eat-
guns missed ur heel but lines ripped em off..have you "missin your feet"-
When he saw elton john he ran up to him like"hey man im G-ay 2-
like brittney in her toxic video..i can see the bitch right through you-
^Wasnt Really Filling All Your Lines But Other Than That Your Rhyme Scheme Was 'Safe' ... 7/10

Pop n' blast gats....like da mario bullets lemme see you get passed that-
leave ya ass flat....spoken "point"'ll deflate ya n' get rid of your ass fat-
Burnt to crisp..<-thats what the detective said when i burnt you, Bitch-
slit your wrist..on that young couple and devorce break up type shit-
Just So Sick...dis "dawg" Spits poisonous venom..so betta not get licked-
^Your Closer Could Have Been A Bit More' Aggressive In Action & In WordPlay' .. But Was Nice ... 8/10

Really Didn't Like The Structure At All.. But ... Nice Verse!!


Genetically imposed by terms, words enforcing demise at anytime.
Force my bars down his throat but still couldn’t “read between the lines.”
^Nice Opener' ...!!! 8/10

I’ll plaster your mind, lines reflecting the sense of this fool
Lacerate your spine and use the “columns” as a “Stepstool”
^Alright WordPlay ....! nice Multies' ... 7/10 Decent Diss

Subtract half his “brain”, when I insanely drop bars like rugged “scalpels”
Engulf my terminology but he still couldn’t settle for just a “mouthful.”
^Best Line Of Your Verse Persoanlly I Think!!' .. 9/10

Your rhymes are wack, just realize you took the "L" on this big time
Do I have to explain why he was giving hints to find his punchlines?
^Nothing Great For A Diss But' .. Was Alright..!! 7/10..


Going With Deuce' ..!! But Barely (Best Believe That) ...

coo, still uppin for honest and explained votes....................

Still upin for votes................................

alright good battle...both of yall verses was pretty hot..good wordplay...good imagery....and all that jazz...some of the lines in killas verse i thought were sorta on the weak side...but most of it was on point...all though..I feel if you have to explain your punch...than you shouldn't of used it..it's like tellin a joke and than explainin it..once ytou explain it...it's not funny...anyways........the verses were sort of even...i thought g-deuce's verse was slightly better...and this line especially won it over

I’ll plaster your mind, lines reflecting the sense of this fool
Lacerate your spine and use the “columns” as a “Stepstool

vote...g-deuce

oh guess I can't vote..sorry bout that fellas.....