Renegade1 vs. $ik
 

15-20 lines

no d/r
no crew
no hate

5 votes to win
u spit first

man w/e hea it is..

Rippin~The~Weak Even When Ya Spits Bitten~Ya~Beat
Punchin Cement Best Chance Yu Got Of Hittin~The~Street

Spit~On~Chins, Ill Piss On This Anus But Yu Still Dont No The Shit~Urine (Yur In)
Contolling~Within, Im Rolling Over This Herb, Like A Bowling~Pin

Im Takin yur style and breakin it down to what it Really Is
I've seen MORE TALENT on a Telethon for Jerry's Kids

Yur in the WRONG BATTLE, cuz yur verse has been Dis~Tached
And Like Dykes At Wimbeldon this is aMs~Match (Mismatch)

Comin at $ik with that Whack Shit, Learn to Say It Right
Even puttin yur verse in a Thermometer yur would be Fair~N~Height (Fairenheit)

Alone, I BONE Crush this Kid, Until his Flows Literally come out his Dome
This Kid Being iLL? Only if he Suffered from Down~Syndrome

Rene is not a thug...he rolez wit a gay rights activist packs
says he kills and hold heat but not notorious for dat

This cat throwz more female punchez than women wrestlerz...there soft and Miss
U couldn't Elevate if u had the viagra pills to stimulate ya growth so stop I Insist

I am stayin fitted on ya head like I was a Hardwoood Classic
u couldn't Rip shit if I gave u blade to cut through plastic

aiight, here ya go...

this muthafucka aint sik, he's badly-diseased/
let me murder this faggot that ill handle-with-ease/
just hand-me-the-piece, niggaz will be glad-ur-deceased/
if ur tha greatest pound 4 pound then u need come harder/
cuz ill knock ur ass out like i was Anthony Tarver/(guy who beat roy jones)
$ik is a fag, he wants to piss in my anus!?/
if i was a "caveman", i'd club this "ignoramus"/
nigga i'll strangle-u-quick and break ur ankles-like-Vick/
ur tha worst on ur team like Medlevanko-u-bitch/(lakers)
i'll leave ya "red" like a "commie", if ya talk shit on-me/
u better "fear and loathe" like johnny/(depp)
cuz i'ma make u rest in peace like ronnie/(eminems cousin)
I'll saw ur head off wit a dull-knife-like-al queda/
and u wont be saved by the bell like Slata/
muthafucka like "pacman" ur lines r played-out/
gameover bitch, next time don't holla my name-out!

uppin

I have to give this vote to ik becuase he had much more personals, better punches and he flowed better. so my vote goes to ik and check this battle plz thnx.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128248

HOT FUCKIN BATTLE, both had nice flow and good punches, sik i hate the way u space ur shit tho, that just bothers me. renegade you came hard i like that way to do ur thang, and you had the multis over sik so, and everything else was about the same, renegade took this by a hair.
v=rene

uppin 4 votes

aight renegade your verse wasnt bad but it needed some work on the punches and creativity but the structure was good. it was to the point all it had were punches which made it seem liek ti came hard but the punches took that effect away. siks had a good combination of hard punches flow and filler lines with good creativity so i vote for him

v/sik

$ik is a fag, he wants to piss in my anus!?/
if i was a "caveman", i'd club this "ignoramus"/
nigga i'll strangle-u-quick and break ur ankles-like-Vick/
ur tha worst on ur team like Medlevanko-u-bitch

rwn turned that anus shit back nicely^^^hot...Ren got this one by a lil...nice battle..~1~

renegade fucckin kicked this guys ass. no fuckin contest

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uppin

HOT FUCKIN BATTLE, both had nice flow and good punches, sik i hate the way u space ur shit tho, that just bothers me. renegade you came hard i like that way to do ur thang, and you had the multis over sik so, and everything else was about the same, renegade took this by a hair.
v=rene

wut da fuck ainmo

renegade-Nice spit in a way...Things
still need to be worked on like similies and
vocab...Need more of those and structure was aight


Sik-Pretty good almost but renegade was tight..
Structure is what ya had....And metaphores but everything
else when nah...but nise try keep elevtin

v/Renegade Return the favor please fam http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356