CaliCollegeGurl vs VA
 

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I've met fellas like Flyweight out flossin and mackin
With breath smellin more like booty cheeks clappin
Come at me with that bullsh** that be leavin yo grill stank
While you let a female on Rapbattles knock you to second rank
Flyweight just salivates.
Cuz he know he wanna lick the gravy off my plate.
But knows that he can't f**** with me because I devestate.
Only ten lines, Flyweight you afraid of more?
But all it takes is ten to get you on your knees like a wh*re.

Hey yo, that was 2 lines short...here goes it again with two more lines.

I've met fellas like Flyweight out flossin and mackin
With breath smellin more like booty cheeks clappin
Come at me with that bullsh** that be leavin yo grill stank
While you let a female on Rapbattles knock you to second rank
Flyweight just salivates.
Cuz he know he wanna lick the gravy off my plate.
But knows that he can't f**** with me because I devestate.
Rhyme slow but worth the wait.
You know I blow the roof off so can't f**** with real estate.
Only ten lines, Flyweight you afraid of more?
But all it takes is ten to get you on your knees like a wh*re

i already got this chic hangin on my nuts...
...you say im veteran, im god like when i bang butts.
iLL practice doggy, and iLL throw you in'a sling...
...my sex appeal got you so hyped, you offerin that ring.
you finish twice before i even finish tha foreplay...
...i wanna hit tha bed and jacuzzi, but i got you sweatin in tha doorway.
iLL crank this crab so rough, her clit aint tha only thing springin...
...like if my bed had hydrolics, even keepin her pussy rims gleamin.
get this chicken head out my crib, she can crash on my freakin step...
...she gettin niggas layed, dome, and t bags, all just for a decent rep.

That was clean yo. Wanna the better ones I read 2 day.

I have to give this one to VA I believe his flow was better, his punches where little harder and his closure was better so my vote goes to VA.

good battle

flow-VA
punches-VA
rhymes-VA
structure-tie
vocab-CaliCollegeGirl

vote=VA

aight this was a good battle for both of you but i think VA took this
with better punches & flow....... but I have to say this was a str8
battle Cali had bigger vocab but that only won't win the battle

votes and links / erm bye

this goes to VA
va had better flows his shit rhymes and everything
good structure and much better punches aight good battle
overall 8.5/10

Cali u had a bad flow work on that but nice rhymes i'll
give u yo props good structure work some better punches
aight
7/10

its legit, one more.... thanx for votes ''uppin for votes and links

get this chicken head out my crib, she can crash on my freakin step...
...she gettin niggas layed, dome, and t bags, all just for a decent rep.

LoL- this was the best line in the battle... It had a good flow, decent multi and a hard punchline in there... I think that CaliCollegeGirl came very basic and her punches weren't very strong... Decent Verse overall from VA and this closer was funny so Ima give the vote to you... VA
Please return the favor of an honest vote.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356