.:ill intetionz:. vrs |8th||Ðìsciple?|
 

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lets do this

okay i gotta do this sunday cuz i got to get off tha computer so you can check in sunday and we will do it then so see ya later

Aight Checkin In & Drop Your Spit Homie GL...........

Aight this aing an Ill Intentionz vs 8th Disciples battle its jus a regular battle...

okay i might as well drop now but you can drop sunday either way your not d/q

i'll shoot ya with 40 caliber bullets in ya back and ya won't stand//
it would take "8 disciples" to be atleast have tha man i am//
with ill intetionz i blow ya whole crew and ya style//(get it "ill intetionz")
with flows that could take down tha whole empire state tower//
i'll cut ya open ta ya fucking stomach is showin//
then leave you in tha desert intill ya dry up chokin//
then i'll get ya sister.. rap her.. untill she's dead//
cut her open ta some things showin then lay her on the bed//
tie ya dad up so he can see whats happin from a view//
take ya moms brain out then cook it in a stew//
then you come home and i slice ya throat there//
throw ya in a hole don't-care if ya die there//
now i'm done..... wit ya whole family at rest//
light a match and let the cops clean the mess//

thats a quick type up so it wasn't the greatest i have done and sure not the best i could have done but i think it can hold

i meant half tha man i am (second line)

*WitNeSS Death From This |8th||Ðìscipleš|*
 

this was a good battle but i have to say that 40 cal. punches was betta. Plus you can tell trigga didnt take his time on his shit. it seemed like 40 did. Maybe if trigga would have took his time it would have been an even betta battle but my vote goes to 40. both of yall did good though

i'll shoot ya with 40 caliber bullets in ya back and ya won't stand//
it would take "8 disciples" to be atleast have tha man i am//
Decent punch, Not great for an opener but decent.
with ill intetionz i blow ya whole crew and ya style//(get it "ill intetionz")
with flows that could take down tha whole empire state tower//
egh, not a great punch but not horrible
i'll cut ya open ta ya fucking stomach is showin//
then leave you in tha desert intill ya dry up chokin//
good flow
then i'll get ya sister.. rap her.. untill she's dead//
cut her open ta some things showin then lay her on the bed//
tie ya dad up so he can see whats happin from a view//
take ya moms brain out then cook it in a stew//
then you come home and i slice ya throat there//
throw ya in a hole don't-care if ya die there//
Nice little story, but its kinda basic in the style, however creative
now i'm done..... wit ya whole family at rest//
light a match and let the cops clean the mess//
Not a great closer.. I think you rhyme fine enough but in a battle I'd like to have more wordplay to make your punches hit harder, or actual factual information thats personal to diss on.. decent verse though.


"Witness The Death"
Shit i neva get tired of beaten bitches who talk like fuckin queers
This nigga aint an All Star at rap.. more like quoting spears
decent, not a great opener but it did the job nicely
this nerds excited - like most child porn perverts
And his skill level will crash - like "P.A.N.I.C" run Mcc servers "
lol, this made me chuckle- great wordplay really strong punch here
but maybe his demise at my hands was just a twist of fate....
take away a ' P ' and a ' R ' have this " rapper " screaming outRAPE...
lol, Ive seen this concept before but its a decent punch
I see the bitch in you Trigga - well excuse me hun! ....
this is emcee is ' Dying of heart failure ' - well excuse the ' PUN '....
LOL... good wordplay here... feelin this
it's a fact u've asked me how i got so smooth at the mic,
& i tried to teach u illness - apparently ur immune to advice!
Yo your punches have elevated heavily, props--
Its A ritual for me to dispose foes in deep holes like Grave sights'..
Ur wifes got ' Plumber ' over my name on the fridge - cuz the way I Lay Pipe...
LMAO- nice punch

OUTRO

Find the grip on .:ill intetionz:. -throats and squeeze tight till I cant hear em no-mo..
Shoulda-known.. no man can compete with this hell of a devil I-hold//--


Yo I think through sheer wordplay and punchline strength it was pretty obvious that 40 had this battle... There was too far a gap in rhyming experience here, Ima have to vote for 40 Cal... e.z
return the fav please
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...457#post1332457

okay uppin for votes

it was close but ima have to give this to my dawg trigga. he had way more punches

Ha ha^^^ what you on Free? your boy got merked

40 totally merked this kid sorry but Matrix your verse was wack really.
no punchs from my point of view and must of your verse was played out in
the 1980s lol

40 flow was on top, punch's on top, word play on top.

Best line~

it's a fact u've asked me how i got so smooth at the mic,
& i tried to teach u illness - apparently ur immune to advice!

Vote~40

Free you can't vote on this battle? should be a KO...


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4o cal jus seems ta be on a lil higher level..trigga had a nice verse but 40 had better wordplal & he used a couple muti's in there also..punches gotta go wit 40 also..all around win..respect ta both..1

trigga matrix- you did a good job punches where decent, work a little better on the flow and your closer was ok not that good but like i said you did a good job

40- your shit was hot! punches where good flow was good word play i liked and you where funny i thought your best line was "take away a ' P ' and a ' R ' have this " rapper " screaming outRAPE..." had me laughin.

all in all i think you both did good but the main word for this battle was experience and obviously 40 had more of it and got my vote.

vote:40CaliberHitz