Street Legend vs. E-Syde Thug
 

yo ill spit first 6-10 lines no d/rs no hate votes due 10 minutes after check in

ooohh i see u figured out how to set it up iight im checkin in waitin on you

yo
check this

im tryna find out what is wrong wit u whore//
Cuz ya record says 1-4, you must be weak wtf r u still battlin for?//
i saw one of ya battles dawg, lemme tell you that shit was trash//
If it was written on paper i would use it to wipe my ass//
E-Syde Thug ima give you some assistance//
Stop battlin and work on ya lyrics thats the only thing i'll mention//
How you gonna battle someone weak and post a old rap?//
You against fallen angel I voted on that//
I know that you used that shit again like it was ripped//
but im tellin u from my point of view it was bullshit//
You aint even spit and i know i murdered you//
I might be the cause of another one of ya losses, but ill still be at ya funeral//

faggot
its nuffin
I dont even kno y you tried

dawg u iz clownin yoself.....

dis nigga tawkin bout imma whore, when i seen this nigga suckin dick at tha corner store/ they call this nigga street legend, bekuz he on tha street beggin/ wutchu be beggin fo money or food, i seen u on tha homeless commercial wit tha white dude/tawkin bout please find this kis a home, i got somethin for u a bullet goin threw yo fuckin dome/ a yo wut tha fukk is B-more nigga, U cant B-more gay so dont tawk to me nigga/ how u gone be at my funeral and i tha one dyin, u couldnt kill me if u had 16 lions/ i do str8 freestyle so wut tha fukk u tawkin bout, nigga u 0-1 looks like u on a fukkin scorin drought/ i expect that frum a gay nigga frum B-more, there was a video tape witchu takin dick deeper than tha core/ so imma end this with fukk u bitch, yo crackhead momma gone find yo dead corsp inna ditch/

fukk B-more nigga its all about Tha "D"

naw "dunny" it aint about the D. yall niggas too weak fam. its about b-more. But anyway im uppin for votes.

Street Leagend came hard wit his shit man
E had good punches and all but yo structer was fucked
and well ounches won this other than that it was a close battle
V/StreetLegend

Hey could u drop an honest vote on this

Sinista Minist Vs. Lover boy plz I need 1 more vote

uppin 4 votez uppin 4 votez check dis shit out....

street legend came harder wid everythin....but u was both wack,,,,no hate or nethin juss use this as a "lesson" ya'll both need ta elevate...
shorten ya barz e-syde
better strukture-both ov u
up ya vocab skillz-both ov u....
n try ta use multiz n metaz alot more they mo effective....

VOTE-street legend....

yo street legend im makin a thread fo us ta battle i replyed to yur callout ta newbiez....so ima newbz letz kick it i already set it up....

uppin.............

SL-Came kindof weak...Strong enuff to beat E syde though
Came aight with the similies and metaphore..Need some
work on alot of things..Multies need to be in there

E-Syde/You came close.But nah you didnt come close
enuff...Work on everything includin similies metaphores
balance and eveything else

v/SL

Return the fav http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

uppin...................

uppin

punches:sl
flow:sl
wordplay:none
personals:sl
structure:sl
overall:street

sorry bout the freepost but its been along time since i seen yah street

I don't know where to begin...

Street Legend started out strong then fell off. Ass rhymed with trash? Assistance with mention? Naw man. The last 2 lines saved face. Flow was aiight. Nothing to Call home about.


E-syde Thug- Umm, I think one thing you could do off bat is set your flow up so that your words that rhyme all land in about the same place. It would make your flow seem way better. Your personals weren't real, so that made your rhyme weaker too. This is all Street.

v/Street Legend