Dirtboy69 vs. Accomplishment
 

10 lines
no d.r., hate or crew votes
no recycling biting or feeding
you spit first...
verses due tonight if not aight pm me..

checkin in i'll try and post sometime tomorrow can't post tonight too busy

rentless i'm smashing dishes over your head just cause i'm vicious//
leave you being religous like ted debaise* looking for god after this//
your eyes burst with hands round you neck i know why i gotta go first//
cause accomplish wants to feed off everyone of the lines from my verse//
feeding even worst then how you use your mom's tit to quench your thrist//
already have lost to me accomplish get a win? only when he battles alone//
in the winners column? you don't belong like parking in a handicap zone//
known for being knocked out this kid's got a glass jaw that's extra fragile//
smash it into tiny btis of bone that then absorb into your blood after a while//
tearing up your veins killing you from the inside that's how i win with my style//

couldn't get into writing anyway waiting on you

Yo the other Person Accompleshment u need to spit na mein iight 1

yo i'll spit tommrow so i'm late i got shit to do

I'll vote on this when ACC spits

then I'll drop a link so the favor can be returned with honest vote



holla

huh?
this kid is -gay wit his author-, or da fag dat types his lines
cuz by suckin his penis is the only way you got some -likeness rights- to ur rhymes
not hungry, but i haven't ate in days on end, i'm in the need
when i look at ur verse, shit makin me think dear god just let me feed
your punches and personols i imagine are hard and completely felt
but what i'm wonderin why ya gay ass aimed em all at urself
this cat is slept on, and my rhymes leave emcees restless
just compare are records and the we can ask who da best is
i could retract his wackness, give his verse a lyrical enima
but the hottest verse ever came from dis canuck was Oh.. canada

uppin for voters maine

vote or die ass suckers

Accomplishment-Not that good or wack..Right in the middle
Punches was that aight or wack but right in the middle
Structure was the best and balance..Vocab was based
and Punches needed to be more direct

Dirtyboy69-very original Spit...Something
like a new person would spit thats very original
Punches wasnt thats great but did hit a lil
Structure was aight and similies though

Overall-It was a tie but i have to vote and that would be accomplishment
becuz he Like had a any bit better in mah opinion..But he might still lose.
But very close..

v/Accomplishment

Return the favor please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127309

Krusty says accomplishment. I am a coked out, craked up, smoked up old fool who don't know shit do'h.

Check out Lil AJ vs Krusty D
I'll share my 40 wit ya
lil aj or krusty

^^^lmaooo@ya sig....... aight dis battle was real borin nun both of u said stood out but i gotta go with accomplishment bcuzz he ahd a betta ryhme scheme and atleast he tried 2 have some creativity in his verse...and dirt i could tell ya verse wasn't gon be good by da way u started out

rentless i'm smashing dishes over your head just cause i'm vicious//
leave you being religous like ted debaise* looking for god after this//
^^^^^DOESN'T RYHME...i see u tryied da use da lil multi but fuked it up

nun of u had any personals but

my vote-accomp

pleez return da favor da link is my sig...GON

ayo i viewed the poll and all y'all dead wrong my man dirty killed um
dirty definaly got the flow and the style and closer and the punches were better than accomplishment's
tips:
Dirty: work on complexity and the personals could have been better
Accomplishment:don't get me wrong i liked it but dirty was better. flow could be better. nice personals thou

my vote goes to accomplishment becuase i felt he was way more iller and da other nigga didnt flow that well.

Nice drop but both
accomplishment nice shit i was feelin yo verse thruought u kept it consitant nice punches and nice personals flow was tight as shit...

bestline-huh?
this kid is -gay wit his author-, or da fag dat types his lines
cuz by suckin his penis is the only way you got some -likeness rights- to ur rhymes

nice start.......

worsteline-none

Dirtboy yo shit was sick 2 just a lil stretched but it was nice punches was nice vocab was on point and flow was tight

bestline-already have lost to me accomplish get a win? only when he battles alone//
in the winners column? you don't belong like parking in a handicap zone//

hott

worsteline-none just shorting yo linez a little looks like a essay

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flow-dirt
structure-both
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vocab-dirt
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