shadow vs. l.i
 

B]deadlines:[/B]
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

checkity check check.....

checkin in good luck LI

L.I. is clearly hated but hes a "self infamed- proclaimed vet"....
his"good rhymes"just like his balls just havnt dropped yet.....
L.I. stands for "lyrically inferior...meaning he cant match up......
in grade 9 langauge class and big words got him stumped.....
lyrically shredding and ripping his record to fucking raggs....
instead of a verse he should give up an raise" the white flag"......
he asked me to drop one... he said" did-i-win?" i stated nope.....
then he responded back... tar UNC Heelz: well dont vote!......
he is a proven cheater with out one single respectable win....
evrybody is kicking this 14 year olds ass just like enygma did !
the wackest in the battle league and yes... uve been elected.....
L.I. calls him self a veteran... but never has been respected.....
thinks hes gonna get noticed over there dreaming of wealth..
li your not a vet ur wack and your verse will speak for its self
cant win but still wishing.cuz the garbage he spits is sickining" ....
when this "vet" is batteling his skillz always come up missing.. (L.I.)

Changed the opponent’s name cause it’d have no affect if yours is seen…
This bitch couldn’t get his rhymes hyped if he gave em come caffeine…
Such an herb, I can use self glorification as punches like ‘I’m unstoppable’…
Get out of the battle league cause your disses are wack, stick to ya topicals…
Weren’t met for hip hop, no need to explain, we know the scoop…
Don’t act like a thug when you rep your location as a punk group…
Mark the date down, shadow’s herb lines were degraded tonight…
I assume…
Since you already on the ground you can’t get to elevated heights…*
Only show up in light, its after hours so obey physics and disappear…
Should have learned from beatings and realized you don’t belong here…
Fuck it, I’ll let you have an extra bar than me, it wont effect the outcome…
And his best ranking possible on this site is in the middle, jus like Malcolm…*

Okay some people arent too smart so heres the deal...
shadow's are on the ground...and he has only had 1 battle out of 21 in EFL....get it now?...thought so...
and Malcolm in the Middle is a TV show on FOX...

Enough to win...

BREAKDOWN

Shadow: nice drop, u came with a nice structure so everything was kept together which gave ure verse a gud flow. u had punches in there and some were hard, but quite a few this time were hittin weak. there wasn't much for personals although there were a couple of nice ones. u had a couple of played concepts, u lacked for originality and creativity, ure wordplay was pretty basic. OVERALL - 7/10

L.I: i was surprised at ure verse, u came really weak compared to ure usual drops. u had some gud structure although a couple of lines were stretched, ure flow wasn't affected tho, it still went well from start to finish. u had some gud punches but just like shadow u had a lot of weak ones. u had some nice personals especially the one about shadow not being in elevated. ure opener was really weak i thought but afterwards u came into the verse droping gud punches. u had a little originality and some creativity but mainly u were usin basic vocab and a couple of played concepts. i thought this was a close battle but u just edged it barely. OVERALL 7.5/10

V/ - L.I.

wow this was a hott battle.... it was close too i never even heard of this shadow...
but he held is own i guess did he hold it down enough to get the win?
li
Changed the opponent’s name cause it’d have no affect if yours is seen…
This bitch couldn’t get his rhymes hyped if he gave em come caffeine…
^^ this wasnt bad but wasnt great neither..not a strong enough punch
you had some fairly strong punches and some fairly weak ones.... you had some ok flow and bad structure so you definitly need to work on that... keep it flowin..
overall 16.0/ 20.0

shadow? man you came with some played techniques.. and then again you had some hott punches some were above average and again.. some were below
you caught my eye with this cant win but still wishing.cuz the garbage he spits is sickining" ....
when this "vet" is batteling his skillz always come up missing..
that was hott ^ and i believe that is how you won with that closer you barely
barely edged this one off your strucuture was nice and you kept it flowing
16.5/20.0
you barely did it
my vote shadowoh yea i have an alias on the old rapbattles can any one guess who i am
oh yea lcb watch out cuz im coming through

sorry shadow...his vote dont count since he aint in the league...but good battle...props on ya verse....goodluck....1-0....

v/ L.I.

shadow started off wack.. first line was irrelevant to next.. 'balls drop` line was disgustin`.. don`t type in blue.. the AIM convo quote line was balls too.. not a single personal or punch stood out.. goin` on about him thinkin` he`s a vet got borin` quickly.. L.I.. minimal filler.. personal punches thruout.. most connected well.. ripped everything about him from start to finish really.. flowed well enuff.. potential Top 10 punch in there i`m sure.

2-0........up..........

breakdown for shadow:

flow:it seemed kinda shaky too me there was some questionable rhyming vote and win? nope and vote? the bar lengths didn't always add up either. still didn't seem too bad when reading it though so 5/10

volcab:not great really nothing special 5/10

punches:best part of your verse you did well at tryin to get personal some pretty good lines here my fav,"L.I. stands for "lyrically inferior...meaning he cant match up......" nice job 7/10

overall:17/30

breakdown for l.i.:

flow:workin well alot better then shadow i thought 7/10

volcab:good job still not too complex but better then most of the league 6.5/10

punches:pretty good job here addressing shadow most of the verse nothing i feel like quoting but still it was working 6.5/10

overall:20/30

vote--pretty good match up but l.i. gets my vote

3-1 l.i wins