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meters vs. vango
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max. |
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I merked this kid two weeks ago, I really thought he learned his lesson
Meters you need to stick to cross-dressin, cuz rappin aint your profession Its not too late to call your priest, maybe he can give you a blessing Cuz I got two heaters for Meters and their named Smith and Wesson Maybe this aint the time or place.............. but I got some serious issues Vango starts to tear up......somebody hand me some tissues I was hoping I wouldnt be the one to have to drop the bomb But Meters Dirtyboys is your Dad and well Latinkittens your Mom See Meters Im not sure why youd ever wanna fuck with the champ I was thinking of a way to describe you, your a Rap Menstrual cramp See this battle is over................the crowd screams in celebration I killed Meters again............... hope you believe in re-incarnation |
Your skill is remote, the joke punctuated when you get sonned
kinda like how you beat me...when i had two votes and you one Van's cunning equals none...stupid fuck can't verbally wrestle like how the only thing not fleet-ing of his are blood vessels Yeah, i murder you witty...when all your punches are phalic a vote would only lean your way if it was Elton John in italics Nail this shit...attack this punk until this faggot understands I'll cut my opponent's brakes...and derail this homo Van Banned should be his destiny...ain't tight or in control 'Cuz Van's falling apart...now that i took his fucking sole I don't spell wrong, it's wordplay. Good match, peace. |
personally i thought this was a weak battle......................
BREAKDOWN/ - simple, both of u had sum nice structure to ure verses giving u a gud flow all the way through. punches and personals were there in both spits but they were pretty weak from my point of view. not much for creativity, a couple of played lines in there and some were just filler, especially Vango using the.....................to fill up three of his lines. i give the battle to Vango cuz he wasn't as basic and didn't use as many played out shit as Meters did. V/ - Vango |
v/ Meters.
So much less obvious.. witty wordplay as opposed to `Smith & Wesson` etc.. wins for me everytime.. it`s (relatively) easy to jus` say b/s cusses like `so-an-so is your dad`.. but it has no merit in my eyes.. Quote:
wordplay is quality on that.. imagery was spot on.. made for a funnier, wittier an ultimately harder punch.. same thruout really. |
Ok
Vango...not horrible had a few played punches overall decent 6.5/10 Meters..Decent Punches u had my fav line in battle Nail this shit...attack this punk until this faggot understands I'll cut my opponent's brakes...and derail this homo Van Overall u did pretty good 7.456/10 |
breakdown for vango:
flow:good flow no problems i see with it 7/10 volcab:pretty good better then alot of the battles i've been reading this week 6.5/10 punches:some alright lines not too many of them though mainly filler fav was,"I was thinking of a way to describe you, your a Rap Menstrual cramp" i've seen better from you but this still worked alright 6/10 overall:19.5/30 breakdown for meters: flow:nice job i got nothing really to say bout it 7/10 volcab:workin well some alright wordplay to spice things up 6.5/10 punches:for the most part it was alright my fav,"ll cut my opponent's brakes...and derail this homo Van" other lines got pretty personal too good job 7.5/10 overall:21/30 vote--meters |
meters wins
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