$pawn of $atan vs Complex Illness
 

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Yo Check It Yo

Yo My Punches Are Gonna Hit You Intentionly Hard...::
As im Leavein u Hurt n Now This Spawn Is Scarr'd...::
Well now im Rippin him up im thinkin Spawn's The Worst...::
Yo This Kid Chouldint Beat Me if he got to Feed of my Verse...::
Losein this Battle is what this Kid is Fin-To-Be...::
Makein This Whack MC Leave The Rapping-Industry...::
Im Gonna Clip This Kat and Leave Him Done...::
This Verse Is Leaveing You Dq'd Cause u kno You'll RUN...::
Punches Connect Like Im a Dell wit DSL...::
My Sikkness Will leave u livein Mayhem in HELL...::
Now We All know im Better So u Should Take Some Notes...::
So When u Do this You Might Accualy GEt Some VOTES...::
So ill Leave you in Jail all u do is Drop da Soap-on-Ropes...::
Punch this Coward Leave Him Lookin Like a Couple of Ponoke's...::

Ponokeyoh..

DONE 1

No Feeding Off My Verse OK Dude Lol na h juss playin No FEEDING

Yo all right

I aint gonna waste any shit of mine on this nigga//
I too good for m so ill let him find out that I whipped ya//
You rappin worse than outtakes from tragedies//
At home you take it out on ya bitch..`Baby stop ya gonna hurt somebody please`//
You stuck to the same lyrics like fucking siamese//
My punches will whack you, Ill find ya outside Chucky Cheese//
So go back hope and cry homie, weep//
Then tomorrow go back to the farm and take care of ya mother`s sheep//
Without money the couldnt tell me//
Whether you ok or in a research facility//
So listen up fuck you lost one-nil//
Dont say notin bout $atan i got another soul to kill//

Yo all right

I aint gonna waste any shit of mine on this nigga//
I too good for m so ill let him find out that I whipped ya//
You rappin worse than outtakes from tragedies//
At home you take it out on ya bitch..`Baby stop ... please`//
You stuck to the same lyrics like fucking siamese//
My punches will whack you, Ill find ya outside Chucky Cheese//
So go back hope and cry homie, weep//
Then tomorrow go back to the farm and take care of ya mother`s sheep//
Without money the couldnt tell me//
Whether you ok or in a research facility//
So listen up fuck you lost one-nil//
Dont say notin bout $atan i got another soul to kill//

spawn had a decent verse but structure fell off at the end, and it didn't close as good as it could. structure got irregular, flow was off some. complex had a little better structure and flow, and just seemed more professional.

vote complex.

complex had much better flow and more punches... spawn, your shit was ok, but its very obvious your new to this site...you need to work on your game bro...
vote- complex

keep it up $pawn u are elevating but not that good yet believe me it takes time...... but complex got this vote becuase he flowed better, had better punches so my vote goes to complex.

complex you killed this clown.spawn step the fuck up, you verse had a few decrnt punches but nothing to good to get votes.next tiems tep up and get some better lyrics and shit like that. complex nice verse, keep it up

complex illness jus had a alot better all around verse..nice punches, iight flow and some personals
$pawn u need to elevate u had iight punches..ur flow fell off at da end
v/illness