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CREW BATTLE(d2r)t-storm vs(hs) big kountry
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house rulez no HATE votes no FEEDIN blind spit 16 lines max verses due by tomorrow 12pm consider this my check in......... Big Kountry DQed.. PMing for quotes no longer allowed Quote:
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Check in ........................
* turns to everyone * Should be a slobber Nocker John * Turns to T-storm ANd bows * Good Luck |
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Ok fuck the bullshit I just wanna make this one point,
If you guys are so good why fuck do you gota beg people to join So your probably gonna hit me with some gangster shit… probably corny, But with I don’t need for an umbrella to weather the “Storm... T”, Who do you really want to win…. I bet your crew doesn’t know this shit, 4 days ago you tried out for us so I guess you’re a walking forfeit, *Stops Lets that sink in* * Turns back to her and spits in this bitches face* Call me ‘fat kountry’, you’re the joke no one takes you serious, I must a caught you at a bad time, actually it seams like every day you gota ‘period’, So here’s something for your ‘bitch’ ass to have a ‘cramp on’, You look bloated everyday, and I’ll leave you bloody like your draws wit no ‘tampon’, Look at your self, I mean jeez, you conterdic your self stop please, Even you are scared to, Quote:
*Stupid Bitch didn’t know what she got into* I know you didn’t expect me to come this hot, but look it worked, I would of called out the newb to, if i already got merked, Sorry to do this but you your self asked to be raped , so don’t say ‘stop no quit’, After you read this you’ll be crying Quote:
*Backs Away Sneering Over His Shoulder At the Broken Female* |
not bad..................
bet he comes sayin im a traitor,check the tryout thread...woz a diss to u hoes!
sitin rite there under your nose..maybe u cudnt see it for all ya fat-rolls! claiming u 2#ranked offensive tackle in new york...everyone knows ur a liar sum cat checked it out! thats brian smith!..u jus a wannabe Mr tyre-hire fuck ur Jim Carey ass, Mr liar-liar...here u are dissin your own crew! u definately dumb+dumber..coz then you decided todiss ya self too! u belong in the gutter,n everyone piss on u...so ur avatars no fake its true...Big Kountry really is the..."Definition of GRATE" in his check,he bowed to me..well..he either japanese or jus squintin the way that he keys... nah u american..fat chuck norris..enter the (st georges)Dragon..i leave u dead like bruce lee... im not one for gay jokes..but i think ur crew shoukd know when theres a fag in their house.. i mean that guy turned gay on him...till likes him..u dislexic or really up 4 rookie of the MOUTH so scared of me he changed his avatar to "greatest rookie"...but ur style sinks like lead u an inbred country muthafucka...whats that rustling?...thats jus ya mum getin outta Your bed u might be B.i.g, so im pac,its "all eyez on me"...my "life goes on"... i got u "hypnotised".. u can call me "nasty boy" but no one gonna "miss u" now ur gone... MERKED...HA..HA :nono: |
shit
couple of mistakes in there...........fuck it.................
UPIN 4 VOTES |
uppin for votes
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Ok fuck the bullshit I just wanna make this one point,
If you guys are so good why fuck do you gota beg people to join So your probably gonna hit me with some gangster shit… probably corny, But with I don’t need for an umbrella to weather the “Storm... T”, ^^ Nice hard hitting personal...but, I've been begged by BOTH crews...LOL Call me ‘fat kountry’, you’re the joke no one takes you serious, I must a caught you at a bad time, actually it seams like every day you gota ‘period’, So here’s something for your ‘bitch’ ass to have a ‘cramp on’, You look bloated everyday, and I’ll leave you bloody like your draws wit no ‘tampon’, ^^ Hard hitting punches mixed with personals...nice...work on creativity with wordplay 24/30 bet he comes sayin im a traitor,check the tryout thread...woz a diss to u hoes! sitin rite there under your nose..maybe u cudnt see it for all ya fat-rolls! claiming u 2#ranked offensive tackle in new york...everyone knows ur a liar sum cat checked it out! thats brian smith!..u jus a wannabe Mr tyre-hire ^^^ You have nice references in your raps. BUt, you need to work on structure here as well as set-ups of your punches u might be B.i.g, so im pac,its "all eyez on me"...my "life goes on"... i got u "hypnotised".. u can call me "nasty boy" but no one gonna "miss u" now ur gone... ^^ This did not flow well...I was not feeling the flow on your piece...it was disjointed. 20/30 Vote: BIG...better structure, flow, harder punches 1 |
I aint talkin shit, just uppin the battle for some votes... good luck fellas.
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Ok uppin this peeps for my man T-Storm lets get these votes up in here
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