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King Solo 06-07-04 10:51 AM

HypnotiK Strategies .::VS::. Destined2Rhyme
 
here da rulez:

10-16 lines max.
no crew
no hate
no d/r
no bitin/recyclin
**NO FEEDIN**

*if mic-wrecker don't check in by wednesday then the D2R crew replace him or forfeit the match*

consider this my fuckin check in.....................................

DeHotBwoy 06-07-04 01:16 PM

this a good battle but i got my oppinoun on whos gonna win ok g/lcuk1

Big Kountry 06-07-04 06:47 PM

/\get the fuck out of here you freeposter/\

Mad Dog 06-09-04 08:59 AM

Checkin in on behalf of mic-wrecker he'll battle dont worry

King Solo 06-09-04 09:41 AM

aight and verses are due by tomorrow otherwise he gets DQ'ed

and u can't drop a verse on behalf of him
i want him logged in and i want him to drop

if anyone else drops for him he gets an automatic DQ

Know-Gimix 06-09-04 09:49 PM

Good Luck both of you... this gonna be a classic right here.

3rd-Shift 06-10-04 02:51 AM

ya name is a contradiction in itself lyrics too falsly complex//
example...how you supposed to a king when u rule no mutha fuckin subjects//

ya flow is pure bullshit nuttin unique about ya rhythmic speech//
even ya crew alias is just a fancy way of sayin ya rhymes put niggaz 2 sleep//

u got some balls to battle me knowin u'll come out wit the opposite of a win//
caz u no my lyrics'll rape ya like the mic had a condom on the amplifying end//

this organized sound i speak will make ya sick take away ya metabolism//
you not ill a hot verse from u is harder to find than a white boy wit rhythm//

i'll snatch ya crown usurp ya power along wit ya jewels//
murk u with this verse and have my "destined" army cart off the rest of ya goons//

after all my niggaz told me ya squad is dismanted a bunch of pussies rappin in vain//faggot ass mc's on two knees tryin suck the urine out of a nigga main vein//

some of them niggaz cant even sustain they thug, play gangsta on the world wibe web//makin diss threads an "typin" out lyrics to get theez rRB nigs hypin they head//

but in real life them niggaz puss like biscuit in life//
suckin down cum 4 a buck them bitches u got wont even think twice//

King Solo 06-10-04 12:03 PM

Like ure crew u 2nd string, change ure name cuz u ain’t wreckin a thing
Mic the only time u get repped is when u in a collabo with da King
How u gone win with played lines, u need to come with some variety
Start calling me fuckin O-Dogg cuz I’m a fuckin Menace II Society
U already tasted royal defeat, and as the sayin goes history will repeat
Even ure crew know ure wack, dat’s why they tryin to join the H.S. elite
U shud change ure name to plural cuz ure destined 2 get ripped in two
In a wack crew, biggest thing to hit D2R was when H.S. challenged u
Mic is destined 2 be inactive leadin a crew destined 2 NOT rhyme
Cudn’t beat me with a partner, so how the fuck u gonna win this time
Took 3 days to get ure lines rehearsed, hopin that I wud spit first
But now I’ve spit my lyrical curse leavin ure verse lookin the worst.

King Solo 06-10-04 07:32 PM

uppin 4 votes.....................................

King Solo 06-10-04 10:16 PM

#2...Uppin 4 Votes!!!

King Solo 06-11-04 05:08 AM

#3...Uppin 4 Votes!!!

Killah Bwoy 06-11-04 05:33 AM

see what im sayin..no one votes anymore..but then..they expect for everyone to vote for their shit..LOL..anywayz....

KS:

nice shit...i think you had a sick flow and structure...you can tell you improved with that because i remember it was on that...stretched shit..but now its better..Your personals....they aiight there was nothing to special in there..but they were good...and your punches..they were ok too..i wasnt really feelin that menace to society line..you need to save the braggin for open mics and stick to dissin him..i used to do dat shit too....creativitie...nothing new...all the same but tight battle


MW:

umm...your punches were ok..i didnt like your wordplay your structure was stretched and your flow was way off..that stuff costs you battles...you need to shorten up your lines...i see you tried to use SOME vocab but it didnt come out clearly...i wasnt really feelin all dat....it was aiight you had about 1 or 2 good punches that i felt...

MY VOTW: KING SOLO by structure,flow,wordplay

King Solo 06-11-04 09:53 AM

#4...Uppin 4 Votes!!!

DeLeon 06-11-04 11:11 AM

ya name is a contradiction in itself lyrics too falsly complex//
example...how you supposed to a king when u rule no mutha fuckin subjects//
ha ha...nice personal
ya flow is pure bullshit nuttin unique about ya rhythmic speech//
even ya crew alias is just a fancy way of sayin ya rhymes put niggaz 2 sleep//
aight....
u got some balls to battle me knowin u'll come out wit the opposite of a win//
caz u no my lyrics'll rape ya like the mic had a condom on the amplifying end//
lol.....aight cool
this organized sound i speak will make ya sick take away ya metabolism//
you not ill a hot verse from u is harder to find than a white boy wit rhythm//
lol.....nice punch
i'll snatch ya crown usurp ya power along wit ya jewels//
murk u with this verse and have my "destined" army cart off the rest of ya goons//
ok
after all my niggaz told me ya squad is dismanted a bunch of pussies rappin in vain//faggot ass mc's on two knees tryin suck the urine out of a nigga main vein//
ha ha ok ok
some of them niggaz cant even sustain they thug, play gangsta on the world wibe web//makin diss threads an "typin" out lyrics to get theez rRB nigs hypin they head//
aight.....
but in real life them niggaz puss like biscuit in life//
suckin down cum 4 a buck them bitches u got wont even think twice//
not feelin it

nice verse overall, but you were talkin more about his former crew
you were'nt directing your punches at him

7.0/10


King Solo


Like ure crew u 2nd string, change ure name cuz u ain’t wreckin a thing
Mic the only time u get repped is when u in a collabo with da King
nice punch
How u gone win with played lines, u need to come with some variety
Start calling me fuckin O-Dogg cuz I’m a fuckin Menace II Society
ha ha...aight
U already tasted royal defeat, and as the sayin goes history will repeat
Even ure crew know ure wack, dat’s why they tryin to join the H.S. elite
nice personal.....
U shud change ure name to plural cuz ure destined 2 get ripped in two
In a wack crew, biggest thing to hit D2R was when H.S. challenged u
again nice personal
Mic is destined 2 be inactive leadin a crew destined 2 NOT rhyme
Cudn’t beat me with a partner, so how the fuck u gonna win this time
ha ha.....
Took 3 days to get ure lines rehearsed, hopin that I wud spit first
But now I’ve spit my lyrical curse leavin ure verse lookin the worst.
aight...

since you had more punches and your personals were hittin mic
and your flow was better i give it a

8.5/10


props to both
Vote-King Solo

drop an honest one on this

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128588

King Solo 06-12-04 09:54 PM

#5...Uppin 4 Votes!!!


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