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DUMB DELEON vs Master Mez
it's time
10lines i spit first you have 7 mins to reply or your dq'd |
checkin...........
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waiting...when is this herb gonna drop...
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Blah not wasting my effort.
I'm twisted ?!?! wait this guy's good ? then explain his shit verse . . Damn If HE's A VET . .Why again Is he Making a n00b spit FIRST?!? fuck , i'm ripping this cat & i wont stop killing em - truth is beware. yep you'll be [b[rookie[/b[ of the month . . . for about a million years he'll put his lyrics in a bottle . . & lay it on the river yo . . & even with the current wave's . . he still cant get his verse to flow. Surrender yourself no resist me fool . . i can break you apart bitch . & dont worry about losing respect . . cos you had NON to start with, am i hitting you hard ... well not as hard as i hit wholes in ya bitch. & really fuck HIS CREW , when even my mouse roll's with a click . |
woups anyway 6 mins ,
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his shit must be wack has to read it three times....7 mins start at 2:14 ct
my turn |
this kid called out all the vets...says he's better than everyone You a soft bitch cryin that you gotta go first…I don’t care!!// And this bitch couldnt "wipe shit" if he was the "charmin bear"// This guy cant be real.. a rappers one thing this singer aint..// This is the Art of War, Insight came ready with Finger paint// It'll be harsh when My witty slangs rough on this puke// but your such a loser, even the dial tone hung up on you// You had a vision of beating vets….but Im bombin ya// Cuz his only Straight lines are on his Hospitals heart monitor // Im through with the bullshit, No more playin cuz I merkeed this lame// And sat his whole team down like Randy johnsons perfect game// |
there's supposed to be a dash in between in-sight
and if you dont get it..its too complicated for ya In-Sight as in In reality |
Deleon got this shit fo sho...
CHECK it... You a soft bitch cryin that you gotta go first…I don’t care!!// And this bitch couldnt "wipe shit" if he was the "charmin bear"// FUNNY LINE This guy cant be real.. a rappers one thing this singer aint..// This is the Art of War, Insight came ready with Finger paint// Another Funny Line It'll be harsh when My witty slangs rough on this puke// but your such a loser, even the dial tone hung up on you// Rippin this bitch already after 3 bars You had a vision of beating vets….but Im bombin ya// Cuz his only Straight lines are on his Hospitals heart monitor // Nice Again Im through with the bullshit, No more playin cuz I merkeed this lame// And sat his whole team down like Randy johnsons perfect game// Nice closer.... Aight Deleon took this by far.. no need to break down Mez's spit, cause it was nothin compared to that.. Mez.. you were OKAY.. but nothin against a vet like Deleon... he showed how he was voted rookie of the month... better punches, flow, and more entertaining to look at... Vote DELEON |
DeLeon won this round overall better verse i loved the line about finger pain and shit
Break Down MezMolois Flow 5/10 Rhymez 6/10 Punches 4/10 Structure 5/10 20/40 DeLeon Flow 7/10 Rhymez 8/10 Punches 9/10 Structure 7/10 31/40 V/Deleon Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
I'm twisted ?!?! wait this guy's good ? then explain his shit verse . .
Damn If HE's A VET . .Why again Is he Making a n00b spit FIRST?!? fuck , i'm ripping this cat & i wont stop killing em - truth is beware. yep you'll be [b[rookie[/b] of the month . . . for about a million years ^^ NOOB spit 1st lines are played and corny.PERIOD. flow is ok...but this stop and go rhyming of yours can get annoying...and you either BIT that million years LINE or this is an ALIAS...so You best explain...cuz Im going to STROBE... Surrender yourself no resist me fool . . i can break you apart bitch . & dont worry about losing respect . . cos you had NON to start with, am i hitting you hard ... well not as hard as i hit wholes in ya bitch. & really fuck HIS CREW , when even my mouse roll's with a click . ^^^ this is clever wordplay...but as a punch, it doesn't do much damage to him...rather filler-ish 20/30 You a soft bitch cryin that you gotta go first…I don’t care!!// And this bitch couldnt "wipe shit" if he was the "charmin bear"// This guy cant be real.. a rappers one thing this singer aint..// This is the Art of War, Insight came ready with Finger paint// ^^^ This is a good opener...and I think MEZ is SOUL SKRIPTZ cuz that Line about "being a rookie for a million years" looks familiar...Plus, he whined like a BITCH in our Battle about me making him post first when that wasn't even the case. So, in my opinion, this opener is enough to rip his whole fucking verse. PERIOD. Vote: DELEON...harder hitting punches.PERIOD. Ps. White Powder...I beat Deleon 5-1...so, um...maybe I should be rookie of the month hehehe MEZ is SS yall Im out ! |
alright thanx for tha votes
uppin for some more.......... |
uppin for some more votes......
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aight battle.DeLeon better verse, lyrics,punches and structure. just cut the bullshit talk in the begining of your raps. if you gonna spit, spit stop talking.anyway elevate everything, the only reason this guy will probabaly loose is b/c he was wack, not enough good punches.
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battle wuz bout even good punched by both dey hit hard but mez had better structure but deleon had better personals so he gets da vote
Deleon |
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