<PhAnToM01 vs kEtCh~22>
 

8-10 lines..no FEEDING..g-luck..~1~

My Blows, their more Overbearing than ya Damn Mom.
Don't know ya last name, but I can tell ur a Fan-Tom,

even if ya Name was McGuire, ya wouldn't get High-Marks

quick one g luck...

y Blows, their more Overbearing than ya Damn Mom,
Don't know ya last name, but I can tell ur a Fan-Tom.
& even if it was McGuire, ya wouldn't get High-Marks,
my knifes-start, ta cut U up in sections like Pie-Charts,
Think U ballin like And-1, dog i'll teach ya whole team,
if ya Pick n Roll, i'll Smoke ya Screens like A Dope Fiend,
If you tellin people u good,no biggie, your decieving at most
It's not that i have faith in U, I just don't believe in a ghost.

i like dat shyt kidd jus comin out n rippin shyt dats wutz up holla at dis kid man im feelin dis

& even if it was McGuire, ya wouldn't get High-Marks,
my knifes-start, ta cut U up in sections like Pie-Charts,
Think U ballin like And-1, dog i'll teach ya whole team,
if ya Pick n Roll, i'll Smoke ya Screens like A Dope Fiend,
If you tellin people u good,no biggie, your decieving at most
It's not that i have faith in U, I just don't believe in a ghost.

im feelin dat shyt son 1

take a look somebody from MT is decent Kids...
cause he likes 2 KETCH 22 punches 2 his ribs....
trust me dogg ya techniques arent metaphorical...
tonight hes losin his virginity...cause he just 'met a four year old'.....
MT prolly gon lose so we gon have some Blue faces....(Sad)
Leave da lead in ya mouth like u got some new braces...
You think u 'off da hook' cause u lost ya fone bitch....
nigga left his own house cause he clostraphobic...(scared of small places)


F1N1SH1N u off

u like a dead preacher not even nuns can reach you....
ma burna caught u...now fo rappin u shud let BIG PAC n PUN teach you... if yall dont get it dont vote ight ~1~ 2 ma niggaz

uppin good battle let da votes take place good shit ketch

weak battle didn't really feel neither one of yall but ima vote 4 ketch~22 nothin really stood out but jus chose some one

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o yea Ketch no crew votes ....

DamnPhantom gEt that Vote Dq'ed



now its goin down like this


Ketch~22
u cam so weak in this battle like hell u beat Kingz and i think u Ran out of Mitearal so u probley lost this
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Phantom

u had nice ass Punches and Personol's i was Dieing at that Four Year old Part good shit


bReak DOwn

Ketch

Flow 6/10
RHymez 7/10
Punches 5/10
Structure 6/10
24/40

Phantom

Flow 8/10
Rhymez 7/10
Punches 8/10
Structure 6/10
30/40


V/Phantom01

damn thats hot is hell
but i vote for:kEtCh~22

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imma give this one to phantom, he came with it harder with the punches and personals and had better word play... over all a shitty battle but phantom killed ketch22.....

VOTE= PHANTOM

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uppin niggaz dont sleep on dis battle we wanna close it explain all votes iight ~1~

take a look somebody from MT is decent Kids...
cause he likes 2 KETCH 22 punches 2 his ribs....
~not a bad opener good personal~

trust me dogg ya techniques arent metaphorical...
tonight hes losin his virginity...cause he just 'met a four year old'.....
~I like this one good punch~

MT prolly gon lose so we gon have some Blue faces....(Sad)
Leave da lead in ya mouth like u got some new braces...
~Again nice punch~

You think u 'off da hook' cause u lost ya fone bitch....
nigga left his own house cause he clostraphobic...(scared of small places)
~Not bad~

F1N1SH1N u off

u like a dead preacher not even nuns can reach you....
ma burna caught u...now fo rappin u shud let BIG PAC n PUN teach you... if yall dont get it dont vote ight ~1~ 2 ma niggaz
~Ok close~

y Blows, their more Overbearing than ya Damn Mom,
Don't know ya last name, but I can tell ur a Fan-Tom.
~Great punch and personal~

& even if it was McGuire, ya wouldn't get High-Marks,
my knifes-start, ta cut U up in sections like Pie-Charts,
~Best punch in this battle~

Think U ballin like And-1, dog i'll teach ya whole team,
if ya Pick n Roll, i'll Smoke ya Screens like A Dope Fiend,
~Nice punch~

If you tellin people u good,no biggie, your decieving at most
It's not that i have faith in U, I just don't believe in a ghost
~Great punch & personal for the close~

Phantom
Flow ~ 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Punch's 7/10
Structure 5/10
24/40

Ketch
Flow ~ 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Punch's 8/10
Structure 7/10
28/40

ketch won this battle had better punchs & personals and the flow was great.
Phantom had a good verse to punchs was good and had a decent open and
close hold it up both good battle.

Vote ~ Ketch

I think Ketch one just becouse of his closer.
Ketch....
"If you tellin people u good,no biggie, your decieving at most
It's not that i have faith in U, I just don't believe in a ghost."
That shit was hot, I'll admit.

the onlything I did'nt like about Ketchs open was he sent it in and then retyped it and sent it in again rather than making another open.I wont take points for that one, shit happends.
He flowed ill and came hard. Punches were to be respected.

PhAnToM01.....
"trust me dogg ya techniques arent metaphorical...
tonight hes losin his virginity...cause he just 'met a four year old'....."
I was feelin this for about 30sec. than I figuered it aint much since if u add the entire shit up. But get props for the second line that comes after that...
"MT prolly gon lose so we gon have some Blue faces....(Sad)
Leave da lead in ya mouth like u got some new braces...
You think u 'off da hook' cause u lost ya fone bitch....
nigga left his own house cause he clostraphobic...(scared of small places)"
This would've won you the battle I think if you would have open harder or said fuck the rules and wrote more or some shit. I was feelin tha clostraphoboc shit. thats good but not enough. sorry dawg.

Phantom
Flow ~ 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Punch's 4/10
Structure 3/10
21/40

Ketch
Flow ~ 8/10
Rhymes 7/10
Punch's 8/10
Structure 5/10
28/40

Vote goes to Ketch

Ahh it was a close baTTle in my opinion none really tried both kept their styles similar punches were equal didnt see much personals although Phantom did have a couple. I liked Phantoms use of Ketches name and the metaphorical line was aight nice wordplay there both need sum elevation but i think Phantom scraped it here. Ketch can do a lot better you have got mad potential and i think more effort into ur rhyme and you would've got this, it was jus too basic word of advice...never underestimate your opponent and i think you did that Ketch sorry.

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