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[.:D:.] 06-07-04 09:27 PM

Street Legend vs. Afa-n-ssiv
 
Yo since I set the battle up you spit first dawg. 10 bars. no d/rs no crew no hate votes. and you got 30 mintues to drop ya shit cuz

[.:D:.] 06-07-04 09:54 PM

it dont take that long doc

[.:D:.] 06-07-04 09:57 PM

yo you takin to long ima drop tomorrow. What you scared??

Snowman420 06-07-04 11:49 PM

im not fuckin scared, come battle me street legend, u set up , u go first, illl be waiting unless ur scared bitch!!!!!!!

Vote disqualified for Cheating. Did not drop verse yet and you had voted

Black Haze 06-08-04 02:06 PM

a yo u talkin shyt faggot shut up nigga dis aint yo battle dickhead

Afa-n-ssiv 06-08-04 08:01 PM

my textual ryhme shcemes are profound and simply outstandin//
my obscene lyrics cut ur ass up then tear u down some//
im a lyrikal assassin, i spit verses with vigouresnes//
niggaz try and contend but the cant picture this//
i makem remeness, of textual slurs and verses so merciless//
im flyin solo niggaz wanna lay-lo, //
street legend is a pussy, neva spittin first//
watch me nigga ima rip a tight verse//
now i know what ur thinkin, i got ur brain tweakin//
but its ok ill even give u time to spit a verse b4 i cut ur ass up and trow u in a hurse//

[.:D:.] 06-08-04 09:20 PM

yo i got somethin for you

Do you even understand the shit you be talkin//
Tryin hard to be nice, just thinkin of random words while you walkin//
Makin up shit, hopin to sound educated//
Stealin shit from you older brothers, so ya lyrics wont be elaborated//
You are now gettin hypnotized wit hylms from a lyrical legend//
Hopin, wihsin, dreamin that some day you can be my bretheren//
But with your rate of elevation, you gonna be in hell still waitin//
You couldnt spit knowledge if you were a muslim after 10 years of incarceration//
I unvale these weapons with radial actions//
I hold a totally different mentallity on the street, on here I play with you bastards//
Lets make this simple, you got a good screen name AFA-N-SSIV//
you like my primary wide receiver I throw bullets at you, so you should kinda be on the defensive//
I know my knowledge that I spit is unusual//
Im done, now tell me this did I lose you?//

Metaskriptz 06-08-04 09:41 PM

Streete-Didnt really come but you
did rhyme which means you took this
Not very much od things but aight spit

Afa-Work on rhyming
and makin punches conect....Really need
to work on similies aight

v/SL

Wicked One 06-08-04 10:08 PM

Weak Battle....Afa n ssiv...man your verse sucked...your punches really didnt even rhyme and they didnt evn hit hard...Street Legend your verse was decent...and it was better then his...and your punches were decent also ..better then his...so Overall you win this battle for better verse and punches....

V/Street Legend...

[.:D:.] 06-09-04 02:48 PM

uppin......

[.:D:.] 06-11-04 06:37 PM

uppin..........

Replay 06-11-04 10:11 PM

ayo it like all these new catz(afa-n-ssiv is one) don't no that the shit is suppost to ryhme.
opener street
closer street
punches street
personal street
flow afa if it ryhmed it would have been nicer
style street
vote street

FlowIntelligent. 06-11-04 10:21 PM

weak battle....afa-n-ssiv your verse was just bad...i had to read it 3 times just to understand it how you worded stuff was bad...structure was choppy...flow was inconsistent...no hard punches no personals no wordplay or multies or good meta's just a bad verse

overall : 1/10

street your verse was wack at the begginning and it didnt get hott until the last couple barz u started off really weak and the punches were horrible...your structurte was choppy too... flow was decent...ok punches...decent personal about his name.. decent wordplay no multies ok meta's...

overall : 5/10

vote: street legend

~!1!~

V.I.P.. 06-12-04 12:04 AM

flow street

vocab afa

punches street

humor street

overall vote street

afa elevate man


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