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plustwo vs. c.g.
aight the rules are:
10 lines max no feeding no biting no d/r votes no h8 votes no crew votes ill spit first u right after me good luck :thumbup: |
sorry dawg can u spit first i g2g n have ma tea ill be back in bout 20 mins... peace.
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aight imma post now sorry bout the w8 i had to have ma tea....
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ok....
ayo what were you thinkin with the name c g// you aint nothin, you aint even a proper mc// when you read these rhymes you see im alot better// don't forget to ask your mum if she got her love letter// yo y u bein like this you shouldn't be confused// ive read a couple of your lines they are so overused// ill take out my 9 n empty a clip in your heart// you can let go of that thing now, your imagenary part// id stop sleeping around someone will get infected// DAMN u ugly im suprised i aint bin rejected// i dont' even have to give my best cos u might choke// you are forgettin your only a practical joke// sorry bout the w8 i couldn't think of n e thin 2 say really lol... |
oooooooooooooooo he said where u at C.G. lolz ya need to hurry up n battle
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Yo dis nigga must think he toonice but i'm da grim reaper comin 2 snatch up ya life//
Funny guy thinkin he can get it wit me put 2 from da chrome 2 ya dome and merk out ya wife// Dumb bitch u neva ready my lines cuz i haven't dropped yet but da flames i spit at u leave ya heart in cardiac arrest// No need for me 2 wear da bulletproof vest cuz i got 12 slugs comin right 4 ya chest// Beat ya fuckin face until u black and blue have u lookin like Michael Jackson after da 1st nose job, a bloody mess dude// why u even come in dis battle cuz me plustwo guns = trouble 4 u// Yea i know when u die to kiss ya moms on her head put my nine b/w her legs and shoot str8 thru her head// |
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plustwo
ayo what were you thinkin with the name c g// you aint nothin, you aint even a proper mc// 7 o(ok opner) when you read these rhymes you see im alot better// don't forget to ask your mum if she got her love letter// 8 yo y u bein like this you shouldn't be confused// ive read a couple of your lines they are so overused// 9 ill take out my 9 n empty a clip in your heart// you can let go of that thing now, your imagenary part// 8 id stop sleeping around someone will get infected// DAMN u ugly im suprised i aint bin rejected// 7 i dont' even have to give my best cos u might choke// you are forgettin your only a practical joke// 6 (ok closer) overall:45/60 C.G. Yo dis nigga must think he toonice but i'm da grim reaper comin 2 snatch up ya life// Funny guy thinkin he can get it wit me put 2 from da chrome 2 ya dome and merk out ya wife// 9.5 (good opner) Dumb bitch u neva ready my lines cuz i haven't dropped yet but da flames i spit at u leave ya heart in cardiac arrest// No need for me 2 wear da bulletproof vest cuz i got 12 slugs comin right 4 ya chest// 8 Beat ya fuckin face until u black and blue have u lookin like Michael Jackson after da 1st nose job, a bloody mess dude// why u even come in dis battle cuz me plustwo guns = trouble 4 u// 7 Yea i know when u die to kiss ya moms on her head put my nine b/w her legs and shoot str8 thru her head// 6 overall:30.5/40 vote:as it gos C.G. has it hope you return the favor link in siggy |
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plus-aight spit...Lil aight
need lots of work on readin catagories thing....Balance and structure was aight C.G-Pretty good..Work on alot of things though to improve..Metaphores was there but not the similies..Balance was stabled v/C.G. Return thre favor please in this http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356 |
ayo what were you thinkin with the name c g// you aint nothin, you aint even a proper mc// ok opener nothing special when you read these rhymes you see im alot better// don't forget to ask your mum if she got her love letter// aight.... yo y u bein like this you shouldn't be confused// ive read a couple of your lines they are so overused// ok..... ill take out my 9 n empty a clip in your heart// you can let go of that thing now, your imagenary part// alright punch..... id stop sleeping around someone will get infected// DAMN u ugly im suprised i aint bin rejected// WTF!!.......... i dont' even have to give my best cos u might choke// you are forgettin your only a practical joke// nice closer score:6.5/10 C.G. Yo dis nigga must think he toonice but i'm da grim reaper comin 2 snatch up ya life// Funny guy thinkin he can get it wit me put 2 from da chrome 2 ya dome and merk out ya wife// nice opener Dumb bitch u neva ready my lines cuz i haven't dropped yet but da flames i spit at u leave ya heart in cardiac arrest// No need for me 2 wear da bulletproof vest cuz i got 12 slugs comin right 4 ya chest// ha ha nice.... Beat ya fuckin face until u black and blue have u lookin like Michael Jackson after da 1st nose job, a bloody mess dude// why u even come in dis battle cuz me plustwo guns = trouble 4 u// nice personal..... Yea i know when u die to kiss ya moms on her head put my nine b/w her legs and shoot str8 thru her head// not feelin this onw.. score:7.5/10 vote=CG drop an honest one on this http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128606[/ |
CG you didnt poll your vote and add more to your vote becuz its going to get DQed...Do what I did when I voted in here....State the names and tell what they didnt wrong...Not juss no one sentence....Like 3 lines on each perosn to talk about what they didnt or liked.....Now please do that
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356 |
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ummm..........aight Plustwo wasn't feeling your drop too much did
you even try?????? well anywayz c.g. I give this to you because I liked every single punch better than Plustwo's entire drop......... big up to c.g you get my vote as you can see |
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