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kEtCh~22 vs JPoll
8-10 lines no feeding..good luck..
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i can't drop til thursday...see ya then.......................
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good luck....
Im here ta test-ya-best-force, ya ain’t sick at best-ya-chest-coughs/ Hear U get on mics like subways but 4 some reason never-get-off/ Dont get upset-at-the-boss, u can keep these bars, jus stage-the-tonic/ My unphased-demonics make blood trickle down like Reaganomics// I aint mexican & U aint texas-friend, but trust I’ll work over-ya-lines/ Holdin-ya-spine(back) from the Poll’s motion so no voter’s-ta-find// Wrote's is streamline a lyrical beam-5, out of luck-dude, U-stuck-in-trucks/ & fix ya avatar or I wont be the last ta say...fuck-you-U-Fuckin-fuck// |
you didn't have any punches?...seriously point them out...cause i'm confused by this verse...i'll post thursday...sorry but i'm busy
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here's my drop...i could have one punch line and win...jokes...
You need to know I kill in 7 days(daze) like in 'the ring'... ^^^I should be scared???... ......................Why cause I'm battling the PMing King... Ketch's rhymes got as much life as a blow up doll... ^^^he's like Bill Buckner... .........Cries under pressure and constantly drops the ball... I'm a relic, while your name holds no wait, hi mr. relish... ^^^you'll never ketch-up... ........brag in your sig, but those opponents are embelished... All i see is seven wack fucks that aren't even at newb level... ^^^asked me bout instrumentals... ...............he said "poll in the back is that bass or treble?"... Ketch 22 translated to french mean's 'a retard who only knows lies... ^^^You ask for my props?.... ........Okay your the best at finding good lines in the closed battle archives...\ poll for prez |
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Im here ta test-ya-best-force, ya ain’t sick at best-ya-chest-coughs/
Hear U get on mics like subways but 4 some reason never-get-off/ 6...nice wordplay but pretty weak punch!! Dont get upset-at-the-boss, u can keep these bars, jus stage-the-tonic/ My unphased-demonics make blood trickle down like Reaganomics// 7...gud wordplay again and a better punch!! I aint mexican & U aint texas-friend, but trust I’ll work over-ya-lines/ Holdin-ya-spine(back) from the Poll’s motion so no voter’s-ta-find// 6...a gud attempt but the punch didn't really work!! Wrote's is streamline a lyrical beam-5, out of luck-dude, U-stuck-in-trucks/ & fix ya avatar or I wont be the last ta say...fuck-you-U-Fuckin-fuck// 7...nice closer, gud wordplay again!! You need to know I kill in 7 days(daze) like in 'the ring'... ^^^I should be scared???... ......................Why cause I'm battling the PMing King... 6...weak opener and the ................. is just filler!! Ketch's rhymes got as much life as a blow up doll... ^^^he's like Bill Buckner... .........Cries under pressure and constantly drops the ball... 7...funny line, nice meta!! I'm a relic, while your name holds no wait, hi mr. relish... ^^^you'll never ketch-up... ........brag in your sig, but those opponents are embelished... 7...gud personal about his name!! All i see is seven wack fucks that aren't even at newb level... ^^^asked me bout instrumentals... ...............he said "poll in the back is that bass or treble?"... 7...another gud line, but drop the ..................................... Ketch 22 translated to french mean's 'a retard who only knows lies... ^^^You ask for my props?.... ........Okay your the best at finding good lines in the closed battle archives... 7...gud closer, i thought it was funny!! POINTS TOTALS Ketch 22 - 26/40 65% JPoll - 34/50 68% V/ - JPoll aight i voted in here cud u return the favour and drop an honest vote on my open battle the link is in my sig. |
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vote Jpoll
ketch verse made complextiy mad flow good structure good mutlies... NO FUCKIN PUNCHES... where the personlas umm j didnt like the structure but the last line made me go OH SNAP... that shit was hot sone ketch 7/10 poll 8.5/10 |
Im gonna give this one to JPoll, his flow had more consistancy and rhymed well. Ketch you put in a good drop but the punches werent there and you fell off on a couple of lines keep it up though ur still new here.
JPoll nice structure nice way you dissed his name in your rhyme i liked that a lot and the wordplay was nice too. Ketch had you on the opener used a nice multi and the spine line was aight too. But J was more consistant like i said and in my opinion had you on the experience. V/JPoll RTF in the sig |
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hard punches
this battle kinda hard desicion, i thought both on an equal level, bt jpoll threw better punches and i like something bout his style. not sayin your shit sucked ketch just throw harder punches say shit that would piss you the fuck off if someone said it to u...
vote jpoll return fav honest votes only please i read your shit read mine http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129178 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129149 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127582 dont have to do them all but do the top atleast FUCK 8th Diciples, ya a bitch slap out on this post to bitches.... all you talk shit none show shit... |
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