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.::N-Sight::. 06-09-04 04:43 AM

N-Sight vs. BigNeks
 
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No crew/hate/dr/bs votes



verses due ASAP


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BigNeks 06-09-04 04:46 AM

ayo im checked in..... lets get this shit goin aight

BigNeks 06-09-04 04:59 AM

ayo, im lyrically equipped to merk you in this battle/
im throwin bars like they we're spears, like third world countries killin cattle//

im using masochistic tactics, to scar your exterior with an axe/
its the only way you gon' understand, the fundamental facts//

Your lyrics get drained, jus like colonic irrigation/
washed up piece of shit, dont belong, like your placement// (on this earth)

my bars haunt your dreams, like freddie kruger, dont hate-them/
if you do you bes' run, and find a safe-haven, with gay-men//

i see you throwin them punches, but none of them-hit/
cos you be throwin them crooked, with a spic-fist//

5-0 K.O. is the inevitable turn-out/
i spit fire profusely, up in flames, you get burnt-out//

your simple scripts illiterate, similar to a dyslexic fat spic/
you got no chance in this battle, like the fat spic, tryna do backflips//

you jus tryin to make it, but you an engineered clone, so you fake-it/
like Pinocchio tryna be human , you never gon’ make it, bitch face-it//

...Peace

.::N-Sight::. 06-09-04 05:23 AM

^^Yawns

Aiyo, 1st off...

Shut tha fuck up with your wack vocab..you lack dope lines-
U MILK your flow for what it's worth..like you got lactose rhymes-
Kid, 3 wins hardly qualify as experience..you must be delirious-
'Bout as serious as FINE MIND's skill..and that is quite silly stuff-
Fuck everything you ever believed in..but yourself is not included-
I could give u AMMO and a NINE..ur dumb ass still couldn't shoot it-
Knockin me out?..thats a story-line for Ripley's Believe It Or Not-
Ur structure is chopped..I've seen more even edges in wood shop-
Stop, drop, and roll I'm on fire..ur dying at the hand of a rap savage, its-
A fuckin shame that I'm going to beat u with a.............average spit-
Ur wordplay is herb-play..a nerve frayed from my attacks and hits-
With such a BIG NECK, u can swallow the truth..u are wack as shit-
Fuck ur baby spit, I got a bib waiting..wipe the nutt from ur face kid-
My endless attrition will have you running to Christians like Mase did-
Your style is played through out..face it, you got no talent in rap-
You blew ur verse out ur ass..so that makes you talented crap-


Fuck outta huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuur!

Black Haze 06-09-04 10:02 AM

iight i like dat battle homies im a hav to giv dat to n sight he led in ounches, flow n rhymes...good shyt tho big neks i like ur spit u did good i jus feel that n sight took this keep spittin tho u'll elevate...

vote=.::N-Sight::.

DeLeon 06-09-04 10:39 AM


Big
ayo, im lyrically equipped to merk you in this battle/
im throwin bars like they we're spears, like third world countries killin cattle//
lol...ok
im using masochistic tactics, to scar your exterior with an axe/
its the only way you gon' understand, the fundamental facts//
aight...nice
Your lyrics get drained, jus like colonic irrigation/
washed up piece of shit, dont belong, like your placement// (on this earth)
nice....
my bars haunt your dreams, like freddie kruger, dont hate-them/
if you do you bes' run, and find a safe-haven, with gay-men//
ha ha....
i see you throwin them punches, but none of them-hit/
cos you be throwin them crooked, with a spic-fist//
aight...
5-0 K.O. is the inevitable turn-out/
i spit fire profusely, up in flames, you get burnt-out//
nice....
your simple scripts illiterate, similar to a dyslexic fat spic/
you got no chance in this battle, like the fat spic, tryna do backflips//
alright....but dont use spics again...
you jus tryin to make it, but you an engineered clone, so you fake-it/
like Pinocchio tryna be human , you never gon’ make it, bitch face-it//
ok closer

overall:6.5/10

N-Sight

^^Yawns

Aiyo, 1st off...

Shut tha fuck up with your wack vocab..you lack dope lines-
U MILK your flow for what it's worth..like you got lactose rhymes-
nice opener...
Kid, 3 wins hardly qualify as experience..you must be delirious-
'Bout as serious as FINE MIND's skill..and that is quite silly stuff-
ha ha funny fine minds......
Fuck everything you ever believed in..but yourself is not included-
I could give u AMMO and a NINE..ur dumb ass still couldn't shoot it-
nice punch.....
Knockin me out?..thats a story-line for Ripley's Believe It Or Not-
Ur structure is chopped..I've seen more even edges in wood shop-
nice line here....
Stop, drop, and roll I'm on fire..ur dying at the hand of a rap savage, its-
A fuckin shame that I'm going to beat u with a.............average spit-
aight...
Ur wordplay is herb-play..a nerve frayed from my attacks and hits-
With such a BIG NECK, u can swallow the truth..u are wack as shit-
nice...
Fuck ur baby spit, I got a bib waiting..wipe the nutt from ur face kid-
My endless attrition will have you running to Christians like Mase did-
ha ha nice one here...
Your style is played through out..face it, you got no talent in rap-
You blew ur verse out ur ass..so that makes you talented crap-
hott closer

overall:7.5/10

vote=N-Sight
N-sight gets this... lines were more complex and his shit hit harder

Big Kountry 06-09-04 11:12 AM

no need to really explain n-sight crushed that man period he tryd to spit some wack gangsta shit at him and he just had that shit nocked down word so

v/ n-sight

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FlowIntelligent. 06-09-04 12:08 PM

bigneks did have some ill bars tho like 1 or 2...like this one...
my bars haunt your dreams, like freddie kruger, dont hate-them/
if you do you bes' run, and find a safe-haven, with gay-men//
^^that was funny as hell lol...bigneks u came nice in this battle deent vocab and wordplay multies were ok...most of ya punches didnt hit hard and u didnt use anyt personals which made your verse wacker than it really was

overall: 6/10

n-sight

you had your verse in sight :P your structure was good your punches were funny as hell and your wordplay was hott...u didnt really use and good personals you had the one about his record and the one about his name but nothing too hott....your multies were sik and the flow was consistent punches was hittin hard...

fav bars:
Fuck everything you ever believed in..but yourself is not included-
I could give u AMMO and a NINE..ur dumb ass still couldn't shoot it-
Knockin me out?..thats a story-line for Ripley's Believe It Or Not-
Ur structure is chopped..I've seen more even edges in wood shop-
^^lmao hot shyt

overall: 8/10

vote: n0sight :P

~!1!~

Soul Sickness 06-09-04 12:15 PM

this was 1 sided ti n-sight becuz foreal bignecks sounded like websters dictionary wrote his spit....breakdown...

punches:n-sight
vocab:bigneks(only cuz he prolly used a dictionary)
flow:n-sight
rhyme sheme:n-sight
personals:bigneks
creativity:n-sight
multis:n-sight
structure:n-sight

vote:n-sight.....


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