sup check this one out
 

does your memory need a jolt it's called home invasion
you will open the vault with a little more persuasion
don't fuck around just do what you gotta
don't make me pull out this nine coz i'll drop ya
i'm takin the lot i'm takin all you got
then i'll come back for more i wont stop
i'll crack you like a twig at the door
wacked out nothin but a friggin whore
dork from sherwood forest park served you here on this fork
stalkin in the dark snortin lines then you try to talk
frontin like you got somthin but the lines you brought
got nothin on this crew you need to take a walk
comin at you from the east coast australian waters
layin down these rhymes in the main stream order
layin down lines like they bricks and mortar
and ya'll know we gonna stick our dicks in your daughter
we're all lining up like we paid money and bought her
you owe it to me for your fuckin lyrical disorder
none of you know me or what i'm about
i know once you here me you'll fear me no doubt

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it was iigth i wasnt feelin it all that much but not to bad for a rookie just keep elevatin igiht...........

not feeling this..no emotion...needs work with advance skil

appreciating good advice
 

sup.. thanx for the advice it's nice to finally
hear sumthin true from you guys.
yo you check out the dissin goin out to soul skriptz
for layin down shit before he knew me
and christian who thought he blew me...
anywayz i'm new at this and dont wanna step on anyones toes
but i do wanna read your shit and rate all your flows
peace to you two for the respect... :thumbup:

it was ok but u need 2 work on it sum mo den cum bacc & spit again lata on down da road