Revengence
 

Um been patiently waiting fa a nigga ta start hating
if ma gun up 2 ya head nigga aint no escaping,
Fuck wit me, n u aint gone never see da end
Like Tony Montana,say hello to my little friend
No one aint fucked wit me up 2 dis day
Except da bitches on hea,but ya'll web freaks n eway
We dun care but nuttin cus none of ya'll please us
We dont care who u are even if ya jesus

Submitted by Dr.Flow n MMR

I liked the way u kept it gangsta thru the whole thing. My advice is to expand on your words and topics. Get creative with it like say I Scarfaces like Tony Montana.... You know flip it a little and give it some feeling. If you just work at it You'll get better.... you have to it's just nature. Keep doin wut ur doin.