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This is the truth on insaine16
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Look this is the way insain16 and i got into it .... And now he want even post This is not the battle flow . This is what I wrote when I felt like telling the truth on a bitch ! I hope he post so I can drop my battle flow on his ass! Alone with a few others who were talking shit to me ! (Verse) Listen my little nicca this is a free style from me to you, Im predicting this battle gone be about lies instead of truth, Never mind about the war we was in, like string's im cutting you loose, Im sick of you saying im ducking your juice, When you want even post Where was your heart at, when you claimed, That you were better then most , pick up your veteran's coat stop fronting before i let go ! Telling every body i dissed you ! When you dissed me first ! Baby girl had some thing to say, but then you brought in your word's Remember that shit look it up bitch ! It's still on the boards ! Im 5micmedallion ! I dont have to lie about war's ! Im kind of sore, Like the scar's on my back ! Feeling the burn It's kind of like jesus each one of you taking you turn's To beat on the leader ! So why dont you rest and leave it alone, unless you ready to bring it to the thrown So we can just... get.. it... on ! Im out side of my home, While the moon is full, Looking into the star's, Trying to figure out Why you thinking you hard ! when the greatest rappers been put in the dirt God bless there soul's. Tupac Shakur and Biggie Small's and now yall want to go ! Be a leader ,,not a follower learn to stand on your own feet. You dont need a friend to dick ride. Just to increase your reach. Man i live on a beach. Where my foot print's remain behind me So there for, You can alway's find me. Like a watch given with perfect timing. The bell ring's to wake me My eye's still adjusting towards the sun rising. I know you think you hate me. But inside you really don't, baby girl...insaine16 Both of you wrong ! As for the rest of you mutha fucka's , who was bringing it on ! Check out the battle flow. because i put your wack name's in the song ! You acting like it's hard to read my shit ! But if you get pissed ! Then i know you understand what was wrote in all of my scrip's ! Fuck giving a brother a tip. Unless it's straight from your heart . Pardon me if i seem rude. but you cant spit with a star ! Trying to tell me how to write my bar's ! You need to work you a job for a summer before i Ben ladden your lamp , And kill you on your come up ! Smashing your face in And leaving you ducking in a hole just like Sadam from our nation When he was filled full of hatred ! Well you can erace it, and get your self set for the truth ! Change your careers and get your punk ass'es out of the booth ! Im changing your gear's with an explanation , The first shift started In open mic When two bitches told me to elevate a bit ! I posted back... and told them how i felt about it .. I was nice at first . Until the room got crowded and the hater's got worse ! It's like JZ The gift and the curse ! I got to find a church Before some body in this rap room gets hurt !! The second gear is hit... I gave my self props on my shit. It's a rap site... Im supose to have some fun. Get off of my dick ! I got the big head Just because i said.. Words to live by ! Well allow me to show you what i can do with my third eye Nicca I seen it ! Genie defeated you.. and left you leaning ! HeXen even told you 5-0 ! So you know its over ! All you said is what ever ! Looking for some feed back on both of your post up's Then wrote back, like you wanted to blow up ! Nicca dont even show up Your an embarrassment to hip hop american's Dont make me climb a tree and drop on you like parrot shit DeadlyVision even told you that Genie would murk you ! So just except that ! what goes around comes right back ! You done it to me, And they did it to you, But they didn't hate . It's a difference between real mc's and those who fake ! You better wake up ! Im hoter then fire on hell raiser ! My cube is turning. With combination's ready to burn him ! Im evil...! You dont want to see a bullet stuck in your sternum ! This is not a battle.. I wrote this for practice . So you can learn it ! The truth is my only concern man ! So i'll tell it how it is . The click you with... keeps a dick in there ass Like m-n-m's moist in there hands Im choking your plan's So fuck your blue print's (outro) Like i said this is not the battle flow.. but the truth is the truth.... So if you dont like what im saying... then stop me then... All i want you to do is post on me since you and your friends said they were better! I'll be here...soon as you drop im dropping,,,,1 copy righted through ASCAP.2004 |
work on ur structure and thatll help ur flow a lot keep droppin good ish
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thats just the way i write...if you can read it...
It will make since to you....God gave us all our own styles, And this one in mines...I use to write like this the way im typing write now. But i had to make a change....So I came from writting like this to writting like this It makes better since to me i guess but it just who i am as a person . different from you or any one els . But i thank you for your thought's, but im not changing my structure. This is what i have grown to be.. and i like it.. The flow you reading is some true shit on a bitch Because he's taking all weak to post on me... plus another weak added to that... So i wrote this hoping he will get mad and post I told the truth on his ass though... He did start the whole thing with me... So he can post on me to show me how to do it better Him and his squad said my flow's dont ryme...LMAO But thanks for your thoughts... im me some time..aight...or pm me to reach me..aight..1love |
hella long..but good
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thank you...some times hip hop concist of telling the truth
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Yes
YEs long but it was very very good. I agree sometimes Hip-Hop does consist of the truth. Very good amn keep it up!
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So insaine16 , what does the truth mean to you?
I guess not much,because you cant seem to write anything true, But i did spit the truth on your punk ass right here and other places as well! So dont make plans to be a hater all your life,Because God loves why cant you? Think about it home boy.....You cant look for Gods help if you dont help others.... ~The truth~ |
goos shit.just structure was kind of iffy
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it was good but was hella long! work on structure also!
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yo 5mic...wudup nucca? this shit was hot, but yea...try n spit so peeps can understand it a lil betta. nice though. pc
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it was ok but shorten sum of da lines & work on ur structure den u'll b able 2 elevate ur rhymes
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Structure changed
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How do yall like this change in my structure?
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its koo i can read it, man yo shit was tite son, i liked it, it was long as fuck but i read evry line, i like yo style, yo peep my collabos wit Raw Killa if u havent alredy, iite 1 love
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CAN any OF YOU check out THE new STRUCTURE please,,,
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