My Intro
 

ayo

Wadup its tha annihilator
Tha public rights violator
Back talkin bitch decapitator
Here to show these folks whats happening
I'm going to leave you startstruck,like you just got struck,by lightning
My position in rap is quite frightneing
So to try to blaze wit me better be aware
Of the danger I cause,beware
The annihilator is here
With a mission,to make your vehicle hard to steer
So don't make too much noise,when were switchin gears
If you wondering who fucked yo mom,it was me
Yo dead brother on the counter,that was me
I'm as dangerous,as a criminal with an ooze
Or as a stepdad who drinks too much booze
So whatch what you say to me wigger
Cause I'm da faster gangster,I pull da trigger
First,in the shootoout
So whatch what you say,I'm what everybodys talking about
On the streets,or in major cities
Im known for killing,and squeezing tities


Feedback plz.it was a quick keystyle

yyyyooooooooooooooooooo,feedback please

it was str8 but u lost me during ur transition of da 3rd verse 2 da 4th & from there i had 2 try 2 journey bacc 2 ur point of view so work on dat & shit ur verse 4 ur intro will b off da hook 4 sho

i agree but beside that it was preety sweet