Lil A.J. vs. snowman420
 

10-12 lines
ill spit first. :shoot:

ight

yo make way
about to go off on lil a.j.
may day
hes so gay theres more nuts in his mouth then a fuckin pay day
faggot, u better respect me, when u see-my-name
im a fuckin soldier, your G.I. Jane
runnin threw your head like a tredmill
cant keep my head still
ringin like neckstill
and swinging an axe so fact at backs that half of it aint attached after
im bring back bastards that rap and strap gats faster then aftermath
after that, i have to ask
if ur ass is a fag
man, im stabbin throats, for a bag of coke
u sound sad and broke, and thats a joke
its a tragedy, but this is how it has-to-be
this guys more fuckin pussy then a dirty magazine

ur turn

Oh shit naw, U done fucked up now
I got tha streets on lock Im rockin tha streets
I got your hoes takin off their clothes
I know that ur nothin but a freak
U runnin your mouth and around my way thats how ya get fucked up
Who they wont, not u cuz im tha headline
Im sittin back reclinin and watchin u type this shit
Watch me hit those hoes, everybody knows that your not hot man
I'll put u in a pot and u'll watch me smoke
U can go choke on a dick while I go and eat every girl out while they shout
U sittin on your ass just passin gas, so go get a playboy cuz thats tha only way u get hard, like me I got girls that handle that bitch

start voting!!!!

vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!

snowman had da better structure metas and similies, and came a lot fuckin harder. A.j ur opener doesnt even fuckin make sense, dawg you need to elevate alot on ur flow, keep workin...nice spit snow....holla

v=snowman

holy fuck i want to kill my self ive seen awful versus but god damn kids honestly i thought to myslef for like fifteen minutes if this line wa rea



for real did your verse rhyme at all

snowman not too good but i saw some word play so you get my vote just keep elevatin you could be good

Aight Well Definetly Snowman go this he rhymed wit a Decent Verse good battle But i Think Both Of Yall Need To Elavate 1

V/Snowman420

Snowman pulled your rapcard blood! Naw for real,though he got dogg, nice ryhme scheme and farely nice punches.
aj...u had nothin man...no nothing! keep practicing man
vote: Snowman420

Have you guys looked at lil aj..verse ti all bitten just not in order....it from alot fo diffrent rapper i see 1 from LiL Flip......

I got your hoes takin off their clothes--he says befroe fam im a pimp tyhen wat he wrote it all bitten shit....so my vote goes for snow atleast it was some wordplay and struc was on a little

to i think i have to give a vote to lil aj i kinda feel sorry for the doo he never gets no votes..lol umm he came out weak but i guess he needs one vote to feel proud of himself
v/lil aj

ummm,this wasnt a great battle but we all need ta get better aight so this is the breakdown,
punches/snow
flow/snow
multis/snow
creativity/none
vocab/snow
overall effect/snow
you both need to elevate on flow/basic ryme sceem,not hatin just been real,keep on writen!!