just sumthin i put down for CHRISTIANITE
 

sumthin i wrote when i read what CHRISTIANITE said
that mutha fucker got me so exited
i also posted against his little battle tread
why's this mutha fucker tryin to ride my leg

i'm stickin a knife in ya wife coz i got the right
to do what i like spit on the mic every fuckin night
did you get your miracale no it's not comin
it's right here the lyrical flow start runnin
fool tryin to present yourself your an embaresment
what you gonna do bout your health after my harrasment
knowin you got nothin but a vocal detachment
he's not comin back he's gone take his accent
at the top now your on a hundred mile an hour decend
now you know me and the way i represent
take your shit home your fake dont pretend
lock this fucker up alone in his basement... :evilgrin:

www.soundclick.com/cmfs pleaze tell me what you think

it aint to bad but def needs some elevation but not to bad for a rookie...keep elevatin.......

thanx for that
 

thanx man... nice to get some good feed back

www.soundclick.com/cmfs
can you view these coz a friend told me they couldn't see em'