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Jacket vs Lil-trip
here we go..10-16 lines...both drop with in half hour..no cheatin
Jacket DQ'ed for pming for votes: Quote:
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129079
vote on that and ill come back hear and vote when your both done.. |
check it...
Lil-trip, the bitch, should have picked a different game. You were off on the wrong foot, startin with your name. Let me take a guess, on how you thought so bad… You were cleanin yo rap game and you tripped on “Glad”?? Your just a pathetic piece of shit, your missin talent and skill. I’ll spill yo rhymes on my grill until I fulfill the kill. And still, it’s a thrill because I give you chills. Your shakin like a fene that popped fifty pills. This is it, give it up, you got know where to go. The only way you’ll win is if in Hell it snows. Im throwin a fist, while your runnin and duckin. Im barkin out game while your chirpin and cluckin. This aint even a battle, it’s a lesson for the dumb. You even think of pop’n rhymes, I’ll chew you up like gum. Im gonna leave you stunned, when I click post reply. So thank you for the effort, but your done, Good-bye! haha lets get some votes! |
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Check *Mic* this bitch aint Big-tymers Reppin *Ice* your the 2004' Vanilla Ice
"Hi Kids names Jacket..'...thats nice, keep doodlin on yo pad from fisher price Jacket stop it step back from yo reality u see a mans "head" n always Cock it jus take this "Roach" n spark it yo "WheelChair" run is over homie jus park it Im hear reppin raps Genocide n "Us" united don' appeal to yo fag Homo vibe Wit yo bra i Got U a new "Padded" Vest to buy, minus the "Jacket" Didnt ask god for a pussy sender...remeber? Yo heart is **soft** n Tender Im the F-150 **Straight-Gender** on Audi Bitches I leave "Fender-Benders..' Im a vet yo a rookie i Cwalk n don 2-step homie so recognize n don Push Me I suck n eat Pink "Pussy..' this is Chess ive been "Crowned" U don "rook Me" You keep hollerin bout respect but yo lines keep inadverdently seem Indirect Gain my respect next time we intersect U speak rap not shit as yo main dialect This forum is to make a bet n will treat this battle as the day we first met Jacket "Covered" n Deaf hearin this wit Death I went *Straight* he chose *left* |
cut out some of the spit...
durin the spit near the rhyme near vibe it cut out a portion, heres the fulll..
"Hi Kids names Jacket..'...thats nice, keep doodlin on yo pad from fisher price Jacket stop it step back from yo reality u see a mans "head" n always Cock it jus take this "Roach" n spark it yo "WheelChair" run is over homie jus park it Im hear reppin raps Genocide n "Us" united don' appeal to yo fag Homo vibe Wit yo bra i Got U a new "Padded" Vest to buy, minus the "Jacket" known to hide Didnt ask god for a pussy sender...remeber? Yo heart is **soft** n Tender Im the F-150 **Straight-Gender** on Audi Bitches I leave "Fender-Benders..' Im a vet yo a rookie i Cwalk n don 2-step homie so recognize n don Push Me I suck n eat Pink "Pussy..' this is Chess ive been "Crowned" U don "rook Me" You keep hollerin bout respect but yo lines keep inadverdently seem Indirect Gain my respect next time we intersect U speak rap not shit as yo main dialect This forum is to make a bet n will treat this battle as the day we first met Jacket "Covered" n Deaf hearin this wit Death I went *Straight* he chose *left* |
trip, i find it very odd that you were able to post this shit twice..makes me think maybe it was prewritten, but whatever.. YOU ALSO WENT WAY OVER THE TIME LIMIT..but whatever....Jacket and trip need some honest votes!!
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lol...
no...
when i was writin the verse, in that section i got hungup on the verse so i jus moved on.. than i hit submit n forgot i hadnt filled in that dumbass..don post your nonsense before Pm'n n droppin your opinion before the facts, uppin for votes... you wouldnt even be talkin if i dropped a prewritten verse on you, so don get ahead of yourself i don cheat i keep it real...uppin |
uppin fo votes!!
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yo jacket im thinkin the same as you on the prewrite but what ever you still won cause you had an all around better verse
V/jacket |
Jacket takes this imo, he had better flow and structure and he came with some good punches. v/ jacket
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i think jacket won cuz of his punches. His flow went good wit his wordplay. His punches hit harder then lil trips too.
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punches:jacket
flow:jacket wordplay:none structure:jacket personals:both overall:jacket |
uppin fo votes..lets close this one out
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aight I have to give this to Jacket because I was feeling his verse more....
flow, vocab, punches, rhymes basically everything well therefore Jacket gets my one and only vote do a honest vote on my shit the links in my signature |
uppin fo votes...ignore the "DQ"...it was a misunderstanding
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