Complex Illness vs Lil A.J
 

Complex Rulez

No Hate Votes
No Crew Votes
No Biteing
No Feeding
No d/r Votes

You Spit First

10 lines min 15 lines max

Dead Line Friday 6:00 PM

Yo You Gonna Check in Or What im Trying to GEt a Battle na mein igiht homie be Ez 1

Man who is this clown
Imma take him to town and beat his ass down
Im tha one who rockin tha streets
Im make people bounce all across tha globe
I got ur girl takin off her clothes
So ya don't come close to me
Cuz around me thats how u get fucked up
Im about to drop this bitch so he can go suck
While I go fuck his hoe cuz I'm tha headline
U can't bust a line if it got stuck up ur ass
So go to bed before ur mommy starts to fuss u low down fucker

ok lemmie spit



Yo Now for u i think u took a Series Of Time...
If You Ever battle another person try to accualy Rhyme...
Man A Battle Like this for me its a Definit win...
Niggaz So Whack He was afraid to CHeck in...
Yo A Record Deal for Lil A.J. He whould never get hired...
Cause after this battle no 1 knows him he's Stated Retired...
Now he's Over Exsager-ateing He Thinks he won...
I Heard Better Beef Lines from a hot dog Bun...
Nigga Dumb for jeans hE Said he made-the-Fade...
But when ever i get a vote ur still not getting Played...

/\ means like duh u suck so u wont get it

5 minute Key in 1

aight lil aj word of advice get betta just bein real

flow complex

structure complex

vocab complex

punches complex

overall vote complex

COmplex took this by everything

Complex-Easy drop and weak but easy to beat him
Had nothing in there noting at all not very hard
punches or nothing...But You didnt need to
becuz he was easy..Keep elevatin

lil-Work on Punches alot better..Structure was there
but your verses was shitty..I mean they where wack
You need to elevate kid and Look at other battles
to see how to improve

v/CompleX IllNess

Return the favor in this now http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127309

Man how u gonna tell me how to drop lines im tha one that kicked ur ass last time

Owned...^^

Complex to this one with ease he had better everything..
Lil you seriously need to ask a vetto help you out because that wasnt good at all..

Peep this.. i peeped yours :)
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129140

one sided battle complex illness definately took this...his punches actually made sense and were pretty hott for someone at his level :D lol jk...but decent wordplay nice structure consistent flow...good verse...as for lil aj that was one of the worst verses i have ever seen on RB...half of it didnt rhyme so when u got to the second half of your verse u didnt even wanna read it thats how bad it was lil AJ u really need to elevate in all areas...first of like making sure your lines rhyme that always helps and that you have punches and not just filler

vote : complex illness ~!1!~

Vote=Complex Illness

He was just overall better.